Rick Kaloo Feedback

[Rick Kaloo]

I feel like a lot of my recent actions have been a bit too bold and unrealistic, and i'm not sure how i'd like to continue this character.

Please leave feedback, positive and negative, and don't be scared to pound me with negative comments.

Note: To see my posts, go on my profile and click on "find content".

Note2: I have issues with "leaving" threads midway through, to deal with more significant threads, any way I can deal with that?

 

[Darth Ophidia]

I don't do this often, but oh my force that font is horrible.

[member="Rick Kaloo"]

 

[Darth Imperia]

Seconding Sneaky Sneky Lady.

[member="Rick Kaloo"]

 

[Preliat Mantis]

COMIC SANS


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07So_lJQyqw

 

[Rick Kaloo]

Does this satisfy your eyes? I thought that Cosmic Sans was a unique, relatively unused font that I could claim and make my legacy out of, but I guess if this one makes you happier, I'll use this one.

Also, I forgot to include this in my first post, but likely my primary issue is that I become unrealistic in intense naval combat, which is also affected by my character's boldness. I've been called out for this multiple times, and have tried to fix this, but i'd need a personality shift, no matter how short or long it takes.

[member="Darth Ophidia"] | [member="Melanah Madine"]

 

[Darth Ophidia]

[member="Rick Kaloo"]

Much better.

If your character is bold, then be bold. If you are being called by opponents, then it's usually because your actions have become ridiculous, not because of your character's personality.

About leaving threads, it may be you are simply not invested in them or feel you don't get the response you would like. In fleeting, this is common as most responses are adverse, not condoning. Investment is often founded in peer review. So, perhaps seek out more collaborative stories that you invest in emotionally and that build your character's relationship to others?

 

[Rick Kaloo]

My boldness may have been a factor in it, but I'll also mind your advice.

One of the big issues my fleeting chars have is lack of personality development, even with contracts. However, joining more general-purpose faction threads or serving as an officer aboard a ship of a higher-ranking officer could help increase development.

[member="Darth Ophidia"]