Approved Tech Rings of Regulation

[Taji Nelson]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create a sort of "Marking Item" that shows those who have one will not be targeted by the Thieves Guild.
  
  
  
  
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Nelson Prototyping
• Affiliation: Thieves Guild, Those they choose.
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Limited
• Material: Durasteel, Aurodium, Gemstone. Internal Circuitry.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Internal Distress Beacon that can be activated.
• Internal Comm with the Thieves Guild.
• Encrypted Comms

STRENGTHS

• Hard to Trace: Due to the encryption in the comms tracing it from the ring's location would be very difficult to say the least.

WEAKNESSES

• No Combat Value
• Jammers would perma-fry the ring.

DESCRIPTION

Rings created by the Thieves Guild as a means of "marking" individuals they deem worthy of not being raided by them or harassed. The rings also act as both a distress beacon, and a Comm Device the user can use. These rings were made out of Durasteel and Aurodium as well as a priceless gemstone. Each of the rings is custom engraved, and made to fit the finger of the person given to. No two rings are identical to put it mildly. Each of the rings is also given circuitry and components as well when they are created.

 

[Taji Nelson]

John Locke Ready for Live Judging.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Taji Nelson

Manufacturer: The Thieves Guild

Please link the manufacturer

• Permissions:
• Primary Source:

You can simply put N/A for these

Untraceable: The comm frequencies used by the Ring can't be traced.

This is hard without your own dedicated network for them to connect to. If you have a sb for a galaxy wide communications network please link it.

• Those marked with the ring: Those in ownership of one of these have guaranteed immunity from the Thieves Guild targeting them at any time unless they radically change.
• Impossible to Replicate: The ring's style, markings, and everything are impossible to replicate.

Neither of these are strengths

The rings have been produced by the Thieves Guild as a sign of those whom they will allow not to be targeted by them. The rings represent that the person has earned the trust they do not need to be harassed by the Guild and have proven themselves in some way, shape, or form.

This is almost the exact same sentence with slight switches to the wording. You should clean up the descrption.

 

[Taji Nelson]

Krass Wyms Better?

 

[Krass Wyms]

Taji Nelson

(Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)

You require at least one strength

(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)

Please tr to expand the description. flesh it out.

 

[Taji Nelson]

Krass Wyms Hopefully that fixed it.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Taji Nelson

not quite but good enough

Approved