Feedback Roughly 800 posts in and wanting some feedback!

[Lily Decoria]

Doing this with Lily as well.

Nearly 800 posts in with Lily and have been loving her journey as a Padawan. Her recent troubles with inadequacy slightly based on some real life feelings I always have, which has been fun and somewhat therapeutic to express in this character. I am also excited to get her to a thousand posts and eventually knighted as a Jedi Knight.

I am just curious to see how others think, observed and can offer feedback on when it comes to Lily. I think it is always a good thing to get some feedback on characters and Lily is a character that I really enjoy writing so getting some solid feedback on what is working for the character, what I need to improve upon and what is just not working at all for people will help me out massively. Especially as I prepare to write her next adventures.

Feel free to be as critical as you desire to be as well, I am not seeking just constant praise for the character. So say whatever you wish to say, whether that is praising or a very critical breakdown of areas I need to improve upon.

Thanks!

 

[Cerys Dyn]

As with all your characters, I very much appreciate how much time you put into progressing them through the stages of development. Lily in particular you have not skipped any steps in her growth. I really admire that willingness to show her growth at every level.

Also, I can suggest a good chiropractor for that back.