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Approved Tech Sakura Medical Weave

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a special type of armored underlay
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Entrophy Field
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Sakura Welfare
  • Model: Entrophy Underlay
  • Affiliation: Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase)
  • Modularity: No

  • Production: Mass-Produced. (Anyone.)
  • Material:
    Circuits
  • Projector Weave
  • Desh-Terenthium

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Other
  • Weight: Average
  • Resistances (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)
- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): None
- Kinetic: None
- Lightsabers: None
- Other: None
- Sonic: None
- EMP/ION: None
- Elemental: None

SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Advanced Stasis Field
Strengths:
  • Medical Lock: Designed with a small internal computer for monitoring the body. When injured heavily the body is enclosed in a personal entrophy field able to suspend their injuries and prevent death with a higher degree of accuracy.
Weaknesses:
  • Locked: THe field created by the generators within the weave can prevent bleeding out from serious injury but they become highly vulnerable and unable to move. Being suspended in the fields small bubble.
  • Ion/EMP Weapos: Relying on additional protection from different weaves and armor or material. The micro projectors are made to be lighter weight and serve a strong function without the bulk of weight. When hit with an EMP or Ion weapon the projectors can be disabled and cease functioning.
  • Power Source: Designed to be used with armor, the weave itself does not have a built in power supply but is instead hooked into the power systems of the armor it is used with.
    Note: General time of system's power is based on Chai La Universal Rylith Cell a standard component giving 6 hours of stasis field activation continuously.

DESCRIPTION
Designed by Sakura as a means of life preserving equipment, the weave is designed to go into armor and clothing. Creating a field that is able to preserve a being. It placing them into a state of suspended animation and making them unable to communicate or move until power runs out or medical teams deactivate it. The entrophy field suspends the user preventing bleeding out from major injuries to offer a chance for medical units to reach them, however the results can vary and what constitutes a major injury is needed to be worked on by armor system computers. The desh-terenthium projectors create a small field just over the skin, unable to cover more area beyond the wearers skin. to keep it from being to heavy it lacks adequate protection from anything.
 
skin, bone, and arrogance
Hi [member="Anaara Clandestine"]! I'll be reviewing your submission today. It's an interesting concept! I have a few requests before we can proceed:

  • Correctly complete the "Modularity" field. If there is no modularity involved, or it is not modifiable, please enter 'No.' per the instructions in the template
  • Correctly complete the "Classification" field. I believe "Other" is the most appropriate entry here.
  • Should this alloy be referring to "Terenthium" instead of "Terethium"?
  • The description indicates that if there is a serious injury, the field will immobilize the user - is this a mechanic of the weave itself (like it hardens to the point that the user can't move) or does it deploy some kind of sedative/medication? The submission does not read as providing medication/treatment beyond forming a stasis. If this is an incorrect assumption, please make all functions of the weave explicit.
  • For your second weakness, please clarify whether the intended function of the weave is disabled by ion/EMP. I believe that is what is being described, but it should be explicitly stated if that's the case.
  • Please clarify the following sentence, as it is a little unclear and I want to be sure your submission accurately describes what you want it to do: "It doesn't do much more than that aside from the danger of it is preserving and takes their ability to interact with everyone."
 
[member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]

edited those two, yes that is the alloy, no it does not release medication. It suspends the user in a field slowing their bodies down to the point they can't move or speak. Hall of Satabs is an animated suspension field for medical purposes on a planet which can serve as the best example. preventing the final stages of a sickness from killing but basically rendering them unable to do anything unless brought out of it. This would just be on a smaller scale to the person. Rewrote the sentence and clarified that ion and emp weapons will deactivate the weave and cause the projectors to not function properly.
 
skin, bone, and arrogance
Hi [member="Anaara Clandestine"]! Thank you for your edits. I have a couple of clarifying points based on your edits; could you please expand on the following in your description:

  • How is the stasis field applied/maintained?
  • How is the field powered? How long would the stasis field last without the power source being replaced/recharged (if that's possible)?
  • Please enter 'No' for Modularity if there is no modularity (this is from the template instructions).
 
[member="Natasi Fortan Vitalis"]

edited the modularity and gave it a time and standard activation limit of six hours. Using what is generally put using the Chai La Universal Rylith Cell which is from a sasori subsidiary and can be recharged with solar energy. HOpefully that covers how it is maintained, how long it lasts. Other then that the weave is meant to be put into armor with a built in power source that it would be hooked into. So made that a weakness as by itself it wouldn't have power to be activated.
 
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