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Salliche Agricultural Corporation - Tier II to Tier III

| [member="Seanna Vel"] |

Company: Salliche Agricultural Corporation
Modification Made: Tier II to Tier III advancement; changes to operations; changes to the description; additional development threads
Rationale: I have completed the necessary criteria for tier advancement; correcting several mistakes in these sections
Pertinent Development Threads:

Sign a contract with two more factions or organizations. (May be NPC).

Making Things Work For The Best
"Girls Gotta Eat Right?"

Make an additional three mass-production products.

TBA.
TBA.
TBA.

Complete three miscellaneous threads.

Justice Gets Hungry Too Ya Know
A Taste of The Fire
Supply Drive

New Submission:
Corporation Name: Salliche Agricultural Corporation

Headquarters: Salliche

Locations: Netassa

Operations:
Development Thread:

Rationale: After months of planning, Seanna Vel places a bid to become the CEO of Salliche Agricultural Corporation, using her contacts as a Nerf herder and the discovery of secrets held by certain members of the board to ensure her bid was successful.

Tier: 3

Description: During one of the darkest times in galactic history one could say the company took a turn of being put of business completely. Seeing that the founder of Salliche Agricultural Corporation had been taken by the Gulag Virus plague, Seanna Vel found that the company had no one to save it. Through her contacts in the Nerf herding industry, Seanna begun her bid to become the majority owner and CEO of Salliche's board.

After discovering secrets held by members of Salliche's board, Seanna forced them into agreeing to her bid to become owner of the company. As the CEO, Seanna took the company in a new direction, pulling it away from the centuries of degradation during the Four Hundred Year Darkness.

Subsidiaries: N/A

Primary Source:

This Is A Canon Company
 
| [member="Seanna Vel"] |

I went through your submission for Salliche. There was a lot of mistakes in the submission, so I went through them and fixed them all. I've condensed the operations, rather than the paragraph it used to be and the description was really difficult to read and understand, but I managed to fix that as well.

Your two contracts and three misc threads are all set up. The only thing that needs to be done is submitting three major produced products to the factory area. When they have been put up and approved, then everything is read to be submitting for tier advancement.

When the above is done, all you'll need to do is copy and past everything here into Company Modifications. We'll talk more about this on Skype.
 

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