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Approved Vehicle Saotome Striker

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To sub Sasori vehicles
  • Image Source: SP42 Cobra MBT
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: My Subs
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
SPECIAL FEATURES
STRENGTHS
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
  • Laminanium: Designed like a Quellian ship the hull of the orbital platforms has a thin layer of the material to improve repairs and over time depending on the amount of damage it is able to patch itself up.
WEAKNESSES
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Built in power source: Designed with its own internal power source that is long lasting but it is largely able to power the armor and systems of the vehicle but when damaged it is highly explosive.
  • Gravity: The advanced thrusters of the vehicle require gravity to function at full efficiency. Without it there can't counter gravity to get speed or thrust for the high speed movement.
  • Self Repairing: Built with a protective layer to patch the vehicle in the event of damage. The time table is dependent upon the amount of damage with smaller tears being easier and faster to repair then gashes which can take hours to reform.
    • Note: Only the layer can repair not the full plate armor itself the plating can be damaged still but the underlayer of Laminanium can reform and remain.
DESCRIPTION
Built with one thing in mind for it complete bombardment from long range. The Two cannons it has on its oscillating turret are a larger size then it would be able to normally hold. Using them with a slow turning speed and general over all heavy bulk. The anti emplacement, structure and if it is stationary long enough airship, vehicle, infantry.... Really all around in the most broad sense. The Heavier guns produce a powerful recoil and firing them off with the vehicle is dangerous if done without some form of bracing.

That is why there are lockdown clamps and equipment installed on the vehicle to prevent it from tipping. This sadly makes for some draw backs as the more medium and close range defense of the vehicle is up to the two soldiers who are usually sent in to guard it with the crew. They don't have much in means of cover or protection aside from the thick armor at those closer ranges. The lock down frame taking the place of most defensive equipment and passenger space but the benefits of being able to set up and have a massive range to clear a path or scout out targets is important and outweighs the risks.

Overhauling many things about the vehicles within their inventory and improving the weapon capabilities... the striker was ideal as it had heavy cannons and capabilities but more then that it could place itself to become a powerful emplacement with gravity locks. The repulsors that have been built into it now allow it to be placed and lock down in places for better firing angles and its robust power supply improves the design of it and ability to deliver strikes.
 
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Matsu Ike said:
Armaments: Proton beam cannon Incinerator-class plasma railgun
These I can not, in good faith, approve on this small of a 'light' tank. Please remove them for other options more suitable, (the proton cannon alone is usually 100m or more) or feel free to take your Second Chance.

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[member="Matsu Ike"] - Please use the tag/mention system on future replies so your Judge knows when edits have been made. Also, please provide a short run-down of what edits are made. I am seeing things here I do not remember in your first iteration that have been edited. This could be considered an attempt by you to slip things past a Judge. Though I am sure it is likely my mistake and not yours, please try to remember that in the future.

Re-evaluation turns up the following:
  • Remove the performance booster or add two more weaknesses and remove 'slow and bulky' since it no longer is such.


  • Matsu Ike said:
    Lock Down Framing
    &


    Matsu Ike said:
    Absorbital Exterior
    &

    Matsu Ike said:
    Hardened Duraplast Plating

    For the first two, please explain or link what they actually do. Preferably both. For the third, please explain how/in what way(s) the hardened duraplast differs from regular duraplast armor, and why.
  • What range is the radar? There are several chaos and canon made radar systems I would recommend you use for ease of us both, and for ease of future customers/users
  • Are the comms systems encrypted or special in any way?
  • What sort of sensors make up this sensor suite? Just a general vague rundown is best here
Thank you.
 
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[member="Julius Sedaire"] edited, duraplast as in the article is highly protective but it clearly states reinforced duraplast is strong against ion and emp's, absorbital is a substance that is good against blasters with not much else about it. The sensors and communications just fit in with the comscan for vehicles and added distance to the radar
 
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