Sasori Force-Powder

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

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Intent: To create a product for Sasori costumers to help them imbue items with the Force.

Development Thread: If necessary

Manufacturer: Sasori Research
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Open Market.
Modularity: Different techniques can be imbued in the wood before it's processed.
Name: Force-Powder

Type of Consumable: Powder.

Legal Status: Legal


Homeworld (optional): N/A

Materials/Ingredients: Crushed and grinded Force-imbued Kashyyyk-wood

Production: Mass-produced

Strengths: +Imbues items with the Force. +Forever lasting effect.

Weaknesses: -Lightside restricted. -Powder/items imbued with powder do not work in worlds without the Force.

Method of Consumption: Layed out on said item.

Average Life: Forever.

Nutritional Value/Allergies/Side Effects/ Purpose: No nutricional value. No known allergies or side effects. It's purpose is to help imbue items with the lightside of the Force.
Description: Imbuing kashyyykian wood with the Force and then crushing it and grinding it, will produce this pink powder that is able to make items imbued with the lightside of the Force. Embuing the wood with different abilities before having it processed will make the powder have different techniques.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

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[Jorus Merrill]

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]

This is a mass-produced consumable ingredient that creates a permanent Force imbuement effect for any given power? Cocktails of eternal Force Shield? Donuts of Force Storm? I'm trying to imagine what subs Sasori will create with this as justification, and I'm forced to conclude that this opens a family-sized can of worms.

Off the top of my head, I can think of two Factory-approved multipotent Force-crafting materials, and a LOT of development went into them. This doesn't have any.

The rationale is paper thin, the potential for abuse is way too high, there's no development, and mass-produced Force-imbued anything is held to a very high standard anyway. Sorry, but these are your options:

A: Overhaul the submission and flesh it out significantly with a stronger rationale, more limitations, and a clearer connection between the two. For example, make this work for a specific set of force effects that have something to do with your new rationale. Reduce production level to semi unique, or limited with a dev thread. Triple the level of detail.in the submission.

B: I can archive this for you.

Sorry to come down hard on this, but we're well into can of worms territory.

 

[Undin Jaii Kryze]

[member="Jorus Merrill"]

Just scrap it then.
Thank you.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

[member="Undin Jaii Kryze"]

Sorry about that. Best of luck in all future factory endeavours.

 

[Jorus Merrill]

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