Approved NPC Scourge Squad

[Zef Halo]

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[Scourge Squad in action, undisclosed location, 851ABY]​

"They are ruthless, remorseless and incredibly efficient. Befitting their name."
-Therran Graush regarding Scourge Squadron, 849 ABY.

[OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION]

• Intent: To submit a Storm Commando unit that often accompanies Therran on missions
• Image Credit: Deviant Arthttps://orig00.deviantart.net/c2b0/f/2016/356/5/8/i_love_this_job_by_slim_charles-dasjuqb.jpg
• Role: Storm Commandos
• Links: N/A at the moment

[GENERAL INFORMATION]

• Unit Name: Scourge Squad | Officially: Unit 313
• Affiliation: Therran Graush, First Order
• Classification: Special Forces
• Equipment:
• ​Armor: FO-SF Mk I
• Weaponry: Depending on operation.
• Melee: Rupture
• Utility: SB-U01 Wrist Datapad | Revealer

[COMBAT INFORMATION]

• Availability: Unique
• Deployment: Limited
• Strengths & Weaknesses:
  ​[STR]:
  Efficient: Incredibly pragmatic and capable special forces soldiers, they are able to complete missions with the highest efficiency.
• Elite: Former FOSB field agents turned commandos, they are one of the few exceptionally proficient specforce units in the First Order

[*][WKN]:

• Light Armored: Mobility is key for Scourge Squad. They are required to be quick and agile. Their armor fits their specialty and sacrifices defensive capabilities for the former.
• Suicidal: Their loyalty to Graush and their zealotry in the name of the order can lead them into the most inescapable situations.

[*]Description:

• ​[STRUCTURE]:
  ​Leader: Captain Hal Jyrran [CALLSIGN: Scourge One]
• Designated Marksman: Lieutenant Mila Vern [CALLSIGN: Scourge Two]
• Tech & Demolitions Expert: Lieutenant Glaffer Mengsk [CALLSIGN: Scourge Three]

[*]​[HISTORY]:


​Formed shortly after the Omega War in 849 ABY, Scourge Squad is made of three former FOSB field agents deemed to 'militaristic' to be fully capable as FOSB operatives and were thus drafted into a Storm Commandos unit where their skills would match perfectly.

Considering their background, Scourge Squad more often sees action in FOSB operations rather than military ones. By chance or by manipulation, the squad are often assigned to Therran Graush with whom they seem to be forming a good commander-subordinate bond.

Scourge Squad's incredible efficiency has had them receive compliments even from the arrogant Scion of House Graush. Their capabilities are slowly becoming renown throughout the echelons of the First Order Military and the Security Bureau, with Graush insisting on their attachment to his command when he needs men.

 

[Taeli Raaf]

Under review

 

[Taeli Raaf]

[member="Therran Graush"]

Two things that need addressed:

• Can you elaborate more on the strengths and weaknesses by expanding their description?
• And the second is just a semantics issues where it should be commander-subordinate rather than commander-lieutenant since you are referring to the whole unit

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Taeli Raaf"]

Good point. I've fixed both issues.

 

[Taeli Raaf]

[member="Therran Graush"]

Looks good then, pending approval

[member="Mahet"]

 

[Zeradias Mant]

[member="Therran Graush"]

Per the template, specific named units should be at unique availability. A limited deployment would also be more appropriate.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Zeradias Mant"]

Changed them to Unique although they arent the only Storm Commandos squad in the First Order.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.