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Approved Tech Seraph: Karrens 1st Lightsaber

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To flesh out Karrens Lightsaber
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link:
  1. Opila Crystal
  2. Orrazerus Crystal (I created it, claiming a right to it.)
  3. Etaan Crystal
  4. Ultrachrome
  5. Cortosis
  6. Spacers Leather
  • Restricted Missions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Karren Trask
  • Model: Lightsaber
  • Affiliation: Karren Trask
  • Modularity: Yes, parts can be swapped. But it is unlikely to happen.
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Ultrachrome, Spacers Leather (Around the grip)
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber
  • Size: One Handed
  • Length: 1M-1.5M Dual Phase
  • Weight: 1.2KG
SPECIAL FEATURES


  • Waterproof.
    The weapon holds three crystals two of which take advantage of a Bifurcating cyclical-ignition pulse, a pulse that allowed the Lightsaber to activate underwater.

[*]Deadman’s Pressure Plate
  • Used as a safety and located on the hilts grip, this device allows the saber to shut off should it fall from her hand.

[*]Lack of dimetris circuits.
  • Prevents short out of blade due to cortosis.
    (See Cortosis Link)


[*]Protection against Poison/Heat
  • Orrazerus Crystal Protects against poison/heat. Will not stop substantial burns, IE: Direct contact with a heat source for long periods of time.

[*]Dark Temperance
  • The Orrazerus crystal casts a dark pall over the user, due to it's origins.

[*]Hilt Resistant to Lightsabers
  • Being of Ultrachrome, the hilt can resist energy for a short time. Sustained contact long term will melt the entire hilt however.

[*]Etaan Crystal
  • Gives off loud sound when impacting other sabers. Disorienting.

[*]Opilla Crystal
  • Can cut even quicker.

Strengths:

  • Ultrachrome: Hilt can resist glances from energy weapons.
  • Poison/Heat Resist: Orrazerus crystal grants poison/heat resistance.
  • Cortosis null: Lack of dimetris circuits let's it operate freely in contact with cortosis.
  • Water Null: Cannot be shorted out by water.
  • Deadmans Pressure plate: Shuts off when out of hand, protecting user
  • Cut: Can cut quickly through ordinary materials
  • May Disorient: (Up to PC) Sound from saber impact is immense and may disorient adversaries.
Weaknesses:

  • Dark Temperance: Orrazerus Crystal seeps Darkside into the user over time, corrupting them
  • Ultrachrome: Can melt when in sustained contact with energy source
  • Dead man’s Pressure Plate: Will negate Saber throwing moves.
  • May Disorient: Can disorient the user as well as adversary.
  • Volatile: Three crystal structure in the hilt can explode if knocked off alignment. Could cost a hand.
DESCRIPTION


For most strengths their is an imbalance. This is especially true in Karrens first Saber. Over a period of time the Jedi Apprentice came to be a Neutral Knight, seeking to find Balance. As Karren has grown her Lightsaber has grown with her.

Effectively she has added Crystals from rare sources as well as metals to make it a truly legendary weapon. With increased cutting power and special tricks of the trade it can operate in Water, Resist Cortosis, Resist Energy Weapons, and generally be a menace.

These come with drawbacks however. While the unique feature might be blessing in some situations, it is not an all powerful weapon. It cannot rend beskar, nor stand up to a large amount of punishing lightsaber strikes on its hilt before it melts. The Darkside hangs in a pall around the Saber, slowly corrupting the user for the trade of of resisting heat and Poison.

Three crystals made it able to fire underwater, but the non-alignment of those crystals can also cause the saber to explode. All in all it is a weapon more suited to a Balanced force user with caution, than a pure Jedi or Sith.
 

Atlas Kane

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The source link simply takes me to a pinterest page, could you link to the creator's page that's watermarked on the image? It appears to be the Nord Steel Ascended by Genesis Custom Sabers.



Karren Trask said:
Orrazerus Crystal Protects against poison/heat. Will not stop substantial burns, IE: Direct contact with a Lightsaber for long periods of time.
In the original sub it states the crystal wouldn't protect from lightsabre cuts, though this would lead one to believe it can withstand some time in contact with a lightsabre, could you edit that to fit more with the original sub?



Karren Trask said:
(Non Unique Materials: IE Beskar, ETC.)
By unique did you mean Lightsabre resistant?



Karren Trask said:
Cut: Can cut twice as good through ordinary materials
While the wookieepedia article does say it makes cutting easier, it doesn't say by how much so I'll have to ask you to reword it to make it a bit more vague.

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Atlas Kane

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Could you edit the wording in the strength relating to cutting power as well?

Edit: Whoops, forgot to add this in, but could you also link to the creator of the image proper? Thanks!

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Atlas Kane

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I mentioned the source in my first post, here's the link.

And you still have to edit the wording on this strength to reflect the wookieepedia article on Opilla Crystals better, as it doesn't state anything about doubled cutting power, merely that a cut would happen more quickly.
Karren Trask said:
Cut: Can cut twice as good through ordinary materials

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Atlas Kane

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You still seem to not have edited the cutting power strength as I've requested before, is there a particular reason for that?

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[member="Atlas Kane"]

While the wookiepedia article does say it makes cutting easier,

Can cut even quicker.

To me cutting easier or quicker are pretty much the same.

If you insist we can go to cutting easier.

Please advise.
 

Atlas Kane

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The special features section was fine, it was just the strength that had the wording "can cut twice as good" which was problematic to me, as it attributed a doubled cutting power to the crystal, rather than just a quick cut.


Karren Trask said:
Cut: Can cut twice as good through ordinary materials
This part right here in the Strengths section, not the Special Features.

If you edited that to just say "Can cut quickly through ordinary materials" we'll be solid.

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