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Shadow-Class Combat Limousine

Amarant

Dead Men End All Tales.
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION


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"Oooh I'm in heaven again
I've got everything
Like a moving ground, an open road
And everything"​


PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Sorosuub coporation, retrofitted from a failed line of luxury speeders that never caught on in Coruscant.
  • Model: Shadow-class
  • Affiliation: Black Scorpion Security
  • Production: Minor
  • Material: Durasteel
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Speeder Car
  • Role: Battle-Limo/Asset Transit
  • Size: 7 meters long.
  • Weight: Fairly heavy
  • Minimum Crew: 1
  • Optimal Crew: 2, but you can fit up to 5 guys in the front if you're crazy.
  • Propulsion: Repulsorlift
  • Speed: Fast: 150 km/h
  • Maneuverability: Extreme
  • Armament:
    2 front-mounted repeating blasters.
  • Defenses: Moderate: Not really well-armored, more typically relying on it's maneuverability and somewhat harmless-looking design.
  • Squadron Count: 12
  • Maneuverability Rating: Extreme
  • Passenger Capacity: Five can fit comfortably in the passenger are, seven if you want to cram people in.
  • Cargo Capacity: 250 kg
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Full mini-bar, complete with two secret compartments for thigns that need to be kept cold.
  • Cigarette lighters in center console, great for self-defense and a quick smoke.
  • Poly-layered ceramic ashtrays that are resistant to small arms fire.
  • Leatheris seats
  • Headlight mounted repeating blasters
  • Secondary REpulsor systems to increase intuitive mobility
  • Sharpened, wedge like front end to mow-down opponents if need be.
  • T-17 Repulsor tech engine.
  • Gravity-gauging roll-cage compensators.
  • Biometric security systems and specialized anti-sliciing encrypted guidance system package.
  • Internal Climate control in both the passenger section (back-end) and the drivers section (front-end).
  • A moon-roof for both the driver and the passenger sections. Great if you want to enjoy the weather, or throw a greande out at soomeone.

Strengths:
  • Thread the needle: Despite being a little longer and little thinner, the damn thing moves like cloud in the moonlight, nimble and smooth even under fire.
  • Paint it black: The War-limo looks so harmless and civilian that most people wouldn't guess it was an armed vehicle re-fitted for war.
  • Here in my car, I feel safe and secure: The car is designed both of to prevent hi-jacking and driver substitutions, locking itself if someone without clearance attempts to grab the controls. Multiple drivers are usually programmed into any given car.
Weaknesses:
  • Brittle as obsidian: While the war-limo is superbly intimidating and highly maneuverable, It's not a typically heavily fortified vehicle.
  • Expensive as Aurodium: You didn't think a "War-limo" was gonna be some sort of mas-produced deal, did you? The damn thing's got more than our interns eat in a year in the mini-bar. Due to this, their squad size is surprisingly small.
  • Hit and run like hell: The weaponry is enough to clear a crowd, but isn't meant for long-term fighting.
  • Who can drive it: If the VIPS or passengers fail to appoint a designated driver prior to the mission, then only the crew will be able to drive.
Description:

Purchased after a failed over extension of the SoroSuub Coporation's foray into luxury speeder vehicles, Ash looked at the lot of mothballed vehicles and saw opportunity. Re-fitting them with high-grade security technology and redesigning the seat space to allow for security forces instead of droid pilots, the "Combat Limousine" line was christened, and made for a luxurious, meaningful statement on the battlefield. Powered with a high-end repulsor engine and lightly armored, the Shadow class lives up to it's name, gliding quietly and with immense agility through any battle-zone it's deployed to, typically urban combat areas.


While the vehicles are both outlandish and prohibitively expensive, They are excellent transport for VIP's with security problems, and are often used as part of a rented escort package for celebrities and politicians who have need of temporary secure transportation. The mini-bar can be stocked to the preference of the leasing party, and includes some concealed compartments for goods that are best not put on a customs form.

Some times referred to as the "death-mobile" due to it's size and shape reminiscent of a large black scythe-blade, a few of the Assessors and other field commanders have their own models on retainer, either as personal transports or dangerous insertion vehicles. Mr. Ash himself has on two occasions jumped out of the moon-roof to assault another vehicle during a fire-fight, but this course of action is not recommended to most officers for safety reasons.
 
[member="Ash"]


Two things off the top of my head while browsing this :


-Link SoroSubb (even if its the Wookiepedia link)

-Mass produced? But you mention how ridiculous expensive things things are. Wouldn't limited make a bit more sense in this case?Especially considering the weaknesses are borderline 'not too weak' but you haven't gone crazy with guns and shields so I think if the mass produced is dropped it make work in your favor.
 
[member="Ash"] | [member="Delila Castillon"]

Sorosuub is a player owned canon company just so you are aware they should probably be notified.



Ash said:
Production: Minor

Ash said:
Speed: Fast: 150 km/h

Ash said:
Maneuverability: Extreme

Ash said:
Armament: 2 front-mounted repeating blasters.

Ash said:
Defenses: Moderate

Ash said:
Maneuverability Rating: Extreme
These ratings fall drastically outside the standard templates for even a swoop bike while being at minor production and the weaknesses do not do nearly enough to balance this. You're also missing a rating for armament.

Suggestions:
  • Drop production further to Semi-Unique
  • Adjust the ratings and choose what this should specialize in
  • Consider additional / more relevant weaknesses
I will re-review this depending on what you decide.
 

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