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Ravenfire

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Tom Taff[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Jade Isara[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Model:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Shadowy Flame[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Modularity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] No[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Unique[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Material:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]​[/SIZE]Maalraas Leather, Desh - Terenthium, Verpine Fiber mesh, Zeyd-Cloth, Force imbuement, DION Fibre, Stygium Crystals
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[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Mulipurpose[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weight: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Light[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt],[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Resistances [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Kinetic: [/SIZE]Average
[SIZE=9pt]- Lightsabers: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Other: [/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]EMP/ION[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Elemental[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High[/SIZE]

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[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Maalraas Leather[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Force Body imbuement on the full suit of armour[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Pyrokinesis imbued into the arms that can start fire when focused on by the user[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Vacuum sealed [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Oxygen 1hr[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]HUD[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Gloves of Technometry[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]DION Fibre[/SIZE]

  • Personal shields

  • [SIZE=9pt]Mag boots[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Stygium powered cloaking systems[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]HUD FEATURES [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Infrared[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Nightvision[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Lowlight Imaging[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Armor output[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Carried Ammo/gear capacity[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Mapping system[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Encrypted Communications link[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Holorecorder[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Microbinoculars[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Enemy/Ally Tagging system[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Echo Location Tagging system[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Motion Sensor[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Life form scanner[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]I was ready for this eventuality - The suit is vacuum sealed and contains within it a tank filled with enough oxygen to last an hour[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Tech gloves - The gloves were designed to help with Technometry[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Ion damages - Thanks to DION Fibre Ion and EMP damage doesn't affect the armour very much[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Shielding - The armour has a shield which can help it with extreme temperatures as well as blaster fire and sonic weapons. However it need to be activated to do this.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Sneaky sneaky suits - The suit has a Stealth Unit on it made using stygium crystals to help the user just hide whenever they wish to.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Firey Arms - Pyrokinetics is imbued onto the arms of this armour is such a way so it can be activated by the user to cause their arms to combust.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]The Body will be whole - Force Body has been imbued into the armour to allow the user to never run out of energy making their stamina incredible as well as take more hits than they usually without the armour.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Void stones and Lizards - When caught in a force nulling bubble will remove most of the effects on the armour.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wait is that Acid - The armour has no resistance to acid[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]It requires the right touch - The gloves that assist with Technometry require the user to make physical contact with the device they are attempting to use it on.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Fire inside the suit oh come on - the oxygen tank hidden within the suit can be set alight possibly burning the user of the armour.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Shields are fried - it is possible for the shields to have a burnout and have to be completely replaced which can be quite costly and require a lot of time.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Flames give me away - If the Flames are activated on the suit then the cloaking cannot be used or if it was shuts down.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]The Body will be whole - Force Body has been imbued into the armour however it does sap the health of the user while it is in affect.[/SIZE]
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[SIZE=9pt]DESCRIPTION[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]This armour was made for Jade Isara although no one is quite sure outside of the pair why it was made for her. Some say it was because she blackmailed him, others think the two were entangled at one point or another. None of the stories are true of course but people like to believe what they will. Tom made it with the same idea as the Noverskaan Wolves armour in mind however he shifted it slightly to suit the requirements of the user. He added Pyrokinetics to it in attempt to assist the user. However he made it so it had to be activated by the user otherwise it won’t appear and if it is then the stealth systems in the suit cease to function.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]It has the technomancy gloves from the noverskaan wolves armour allowing it to hack into systems using the force. It however also has force body to allow the user to take more hits than they would outside the suit. However as usual any and all force imbuements can be turned off or defeated by void stone and ysalamiri. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]It was also given several materials and shielding devices to assist against blaster, lightsabres, temperatures, kinetic forces and even EMP or Ion forms of damage to the suit. However in that same vein problems have arisen with how much it can withstand and acid damage being able to burn through most of the material present.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]This suit is also sealed with enough oxygen to last the user an hour and mag boots encase someone tries sucking the user into space. It was also made to be stealthy which is why the armour has a stygium cloaking system that can keep the user hidden and one final thing is that the oxygen within the suit has a chance of catching fire burning the user while they are within the suit.[/SIZE]
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Hi [member="Tom Taff"], I'll be the judge reviewing this suit of armour today. It's a nice mix of tricks that should be great fun to see, but I have 2 concerns.

The armour seems a little unbalanced at the moment. While you don't have to change anything, I would recommend you either increase the weight of the armour, or lower a rating.

I am also unsure about the wording of your final strength.



Tom Taff said:
The Body will be whole - Force Body has been imbued into the armour to allow the user to never run out of energy making their stamina incredible as well as take more hits than they usually without the armour.

This is a much stronger explanation than the force body article on Wookiepedia which states that it requires a balance, sacrificing well being to increase their endurance. Is that what's happening here? The armour saps at its wearer's health while increasing their endurance?
 
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