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Approved Starship Shag Bo/Slave I

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Intent: To use the awesome ship that is, Slave I

Development Thread: 63~ posts of dev
Man...this needs some upgrades ''I thought those things were just legend!... Test Drive
Manufacturer: Kuat Systems Engineering, modified by Jango Fett, Boba Fett, and Ke'Cholo.

Model: Firespray-31-class patrol and attack craft

Affiliation: Previously, Oovo IV, then Jango, then Boba, then unknown until coming into the hands of Ke'Cholo

Modularity: Especially, many custom features installed with the option for many more.

Production: UNIQUE

Material: Titanium, various blasters components, hyperdrive, backup hyperdrive, top-of-the-line flight controls, seismic charge release mechanism.

Classification: Bounty hunter vessel, prisoner transport, and general dog-fighter.

Height: 7.8 meters

Length: 21.5 meter

Width: 21.3 meter

Weight: Several metric tons.

Minimum Crew: 1 pilot

Optimal Crew: 1 pilot and 1 co-pilot with 6 prisoners (one of which that could be held in a force cage) and 2 non prisoner passengers.

Propulsion: Repulsorlift

Top Speed: 70 megalights per hour or 1,000 kmp in atmosphere.

Armaments:

Rated 15/20


[*]F1 tractor beam projector
[*]Homing beacon launcher (1)
  • Standard load: Void-7 seismic charges (9)


Maneuverability Rating: 2

Speed Rating: 1

Hyperdrive Class: .7 hyperdrive, backup of class 2

Passenger Capacity: 2 passengers, 6 prinsoners


Strengths:

Swiss Army Knife: Jack of all trades, and master of some, Shag Bo always has something up it's sleeve.

Fast: Very fast and has a top-of-the-line hyperdrive

Maneuverable: Shag Bo could turn at the drop of a credit.

Force Cage: She comes equipped with a force cage

Infamous: Historians and mercenaries familiar with history will tremble when they see this ship fly over the horizon.

Seismic Charges: Perhaps it's most devastating weapon, Shag Bo comes equipped with a seismic charge dispenser so powerful only a capital ship could withstand it's blast.


Weaknesses:

Odd take off procedure: Due to the shape of Shag Bo, it takes skill and training to take off with her.

Cargo Capacity: 40 metric tons.

Misc. Equipment: Escape pod, force cage, 5 regular cells, tractor beam, Sensor mask and jamming systems Static discharge port

Description: Quite the vessel, Ke'Cholo discovered this long lost relic in a trash dump of all places. Recognizing the legendary ship he killed the owner of the dump and took her for himself. He landed the ship on Tek-1 (his personal cruiser) where he discovered she needed upgrades. After running a scan of the ship, he discovered a secret compartment. Inside this compartment was a datacron of Jango Fett. On this datacron, Jango described a secret base to his son, Boba Fett. Ke'Cholo was then told that the ship was composed of two different sets of parts, meaning the Boba had done some upgrading. With this knowledge in hand, Ke'Cholo believed that there was a second craft inside the secret base of the Fetts, on Hoth.

Ke'Cholo traveled to Hoth and discovered that there was indeed, a second vessel. He, Qaeth Idos, and T'Chungo repaired the vessel over the course of two weeks. Most of the parts they needed were there but some needed to be special ordered. Ke'Cholo's crew left him to obtain the items, leaving the three repairmen on the icy planet of Hoth. Surviving a food shortage, the crew returned and the final repairs were made.

Who Can Use This: Ke'Cholo only. It's his favorite toy.

Wiki: Slave I - Wookieepedia - Wikia
*THIS IS A CANON ITEM*
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review
 
[member="Reshmar"] instead of scrapping the whole thing, I added in the fields that were in starships but not in ships. If you see an extra field or two it's probably from the ship template, I left the in bc I felt they fit. If I did miss a field, tell me which one. Sorry for the delay.
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="KeCholo"]

OK so here is the main issue. Since this is a canon ship and so very iconic It will need some considerable Development. To give you some idea look at the submission for the millennium falcon. It has over 70 posts of development. So you will need to do considerably more work development wise.



KeCholo said:
Maneuverability Rating:2-3 Speed Rating: 1-2
Please make Speed 2 and maneuvering 3. standard speed and maneuvering for a ship this size is 5. since you need more development anyway you can get the speed down to 1 if you like with that since this is unique and iconic.



KeCholo said:
Hyperdrive Class: .5 hyperdrive
this will also need more development. I usually ask for development on anything with a hyperdrive under class 1.



KeCholo said:
Cloaking deviceDecoy system Sensor mask and jamming systems Static discharge port
stealth tech automatically requires development.



KeCholo said:
Description: (copied from the official star wars wiki) Slave I was a modified Firespray-31-class patrol and attack craft used by the infamous bounty hunter Jango Fett before the Clone Wars.[3] Jango outfitted the craft with a number of weapons, including laser cannons, projectile launchers, and seismic charges.[11] While under Jango's ownership, the ship was in a dogfight over Geonosis with the Jedi starfighter piloted by Obi-Wan Kenobi.[3] After Jango's death during the Battle of Geonosis,[3] the craft came into the possession of his son, Boba Fett, who used it throughout his own bounty hunting career.[9] It was also briefly owned by the spice pirate Hondo Ohnaka,[7] before returning to Boba's ownership near the end of the Clone Wars.[8] The ship became well-known to the galaxy's fugitives, who recognized it as the ship owned by one of the galaxy's deadliest bounty hunters.[11] During the Galactic Civil War, Boba used Slave I to transport a carbon-frozen Han Solo from Cloud City to Jabba the Hutt on Tatooine.[9] Originally, it had a blue base instead of the dark red, this was then changed when it came into Boba's possession.
You will need to redo this. we do not allow copy and pasting in factory submissions.

You have a few options but it needs more development and the description has to be redone.
 
Reshmar said:
OK so here is the main issue. Since this is a canon ship and so very iconic It will need some considerable Development. To give you some idea look at the submission for the millennium falcon. It has over 70 posts of development. So you will need to do considerably more work development wise.
I would say 30 posts, since the falcon is much more iconic than Slave 1. Expect another thread soon, I'll link.



Reshmar said:
Please make Speed 2 and maneuvering 3.
Changed, will change again after thread is up



Reshmar said:
I usually ask for development on anything with a hyperdrive under class 1.
I would disagree as the hyperdrive equipped whilst Boba was a .7 and presumably would've been bumped up/down to a .5



Reshmar said:
stealth tech automatically requires development.
This was equipped under Fett and thus I think would not need devolpment as I am not making it nor equipping it.



Reshmar said:
ou will need to redo this. we do not allow copy and pasting in factory submissions.
Will get this done after dev, please don't archive this yet. If I get lazy, you can.
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="KeCholo"]



KeCholo said:
I would say 30 posts, since the falcon is much more iconic than Slave 1. Expect another thread soon, I'll link.
30 posts More? or 30 counting the posts you have?



KeCholo said:
I would disagree as the hyperdrive equipped whilst Boba was a .7 and presumably would've been bumped up/down to a .5
If you like make it .7 for anything less you will need development.

at unique production the class .5 hyperdrive would need 10 posts



KeCholo said:
This was equipped under Fett and thus I think would not need devolpment as I am not making it nor equipping it.
The stealth requires development regardless. as for what he added wiki states he added
"A stolen sensor masking and jamming array
"In 40 ABY, Slave I had a decoy system"
no cloaking device.

for the cloaking device at unique production you will need 10 posts mining stygium.
 
Reshmar said:
30 posts More? or 30 counting the posts you have?
30-40 counting to one's I have already



Reshmar said:
at unique production the class .5 hyperdrive would need 10 posts
I don't think it's worth 10 posts just to drop it down by .2. Perhaps in the future, otherwise changed.
Reshmar said:
The stealth requires development regardless. as for what he added wiki states he added "A stolen sensor masking and jamming array "In 40 ABY, Slave I had a decoy system" no cloaking device. for the cloaking device at unique production you will need 10 posts mining stygium.
I'll remove this and (like the hyperdrive) upgrade it later.
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="KeCholo"]


KeCholo said:
30-40 counting to one's I have already
make it 40 for the ship itself and its good.


KeCholo said:
I don't think it's worth 10 posts just to drop it down by .2. Perhaps in the future, otherwise changed.
a class .5 hyperdrive can run upwards of 30 to 50 posts depending on the production and the vessel size. Normally I ask for 30 but since it is already a .7...


KeCholo said:
I'll remove this and (like the hyperdrive) upgrade it later.
thats cool but you will most likely have to do more development than you would now to add it later.

You could do a stygium mining thread with 20 posts and wrap up the .5 hyperdrive and the cloaking device. The finish out the thread you already have going that you are using for the canon ship itself. You would have too finish that anyway.

I want you to have the ship the way you want it but It just requires a bit more work. Not alot, just 20 more for the ship and the 20 post stygium thread.

Finish the thread you have going please see that it has about 20 more posts between everyone in it. that will make it golden with the .7 hyperdrive
or
finish the thread you have with 20 more posts between everyone in it and do a 20 post stygium mining thread and get the cloaking and the .5 hyperdrive.
 
Reshmar said:
Finish the thread you have going please see that it has about 20 more posts between everyone in it. that will make it golden with the .7 hyperdrive
I'll finish the thread up, might make another one if I don't meet the requireents of posts. Since you are a fj, how many posts would I need for Fett's armor?
 
KeCholo said:
I'll finish the thread up, might make another one if I don't meet the requireents of posts. Since you are a fj, how many posts would I need for Fett's armor?
Please keep discussion relevant to the submission. Questions regarding other materials may be made in the factory discussion and Q&A thread.
 
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