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Approved Location Shima Temple

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To add to the many temples of Quan'lo
  • Image Credit: Avatar
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: My Subs
  • Links: N/A
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: Shima Temple
  • Classification: Temple Complex
  • Location: Atrisia codex Atrisia wookiee
  • Affiliation: Atrisian Commonwealth
  • Accessibility: Difficult to reach given the region it is in with the mountains. The steep cliffs and barren sections make travel by foot path less then idealand the design makes finding it from the air magnitudes harder.
  • Description: Built into the side of a mountain and its overhang. The Shima temple was in many ways one of the first structures in Que'lo that the city stumbled upon. With descending temples and ornate bridges between them. The chasm itself is not bottomless but it is obscured by shadows from the mountains themselves. The temple housing many in the way of rooms, ponic areas and secretly a map to Chitai tunnels coming to the surface. The more simplistic nature of it functions to show the ancient atrisian temples inthe region that have been recovered and moved into by different groups looking to settle the more remote areas of the world.
POINTS OF INTEREST
Hanging Gardens: Beautiful and almost an early hydroponics area that has been created and creates food for the temple. The gardens actually can be moved and rotated so different fruits and harvests can be given exposures. With mirrors and some crystals to make it so the light is visible it mirrors hetzel primes in being able to have harvests years round while the different soils have been changed to grow crops from all around the galaxy.

Aviary: In the southern area of the temple and having one bridge leading to it but hundreds of smaller slots that are used to allow birds from a thousand different species and colors into it. The aviary is considered to rival only the horselords of Atrisia's for sheer amount.

SECURITY
Low:
Being an open air temple there is not much in the way of security or defenses... certain aspects have been allowed to be improved upon such as the roadways.... and the location of the temple provides it a great deal of protection from aerial units as the narrow canyon and overhang obscure it.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The ancient temple once served the ancient Atrisians as a place of learning and retreat. Carved into the side of a mountain and overhanging from a cliff the foundation of the temple itself is ancient compared to most on the world and it sadly was remote enough tobe abandoned for tens of thousands of years until survey teams trying to relocate species rescued by Lian from worlds the sith were attacking were seeking space. The As-Aki have found there being able to take it over and thrive with their clans ad some Atrisians have started to join them as they attend the aviary whihc can hold birds and other flying creatures from across the galaxy. To the gardens that are being used to produce additional food for all of the refugees. It is not much but then as the records recovered show the ancient atrisians largely built this before they were driven underground into chitai being in the temple only a few months.
 
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Ylla Caeli'runa

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Hey there, I just wanted to let you know that I still intend to read and review your sub! School and college prep have been crazy lately, but I can promise that I'll do my best to get to your submission within the next few days so that we can get that shiny approval for this one. Thank you very much for your patience and understanding.
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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First off, thank you for your patience as I settled real life matters! This looks great with a few things that I'd like to suggest:

Template Choice | I believe that this would have worked better under the Generic Structure template rather than the City template for Locations. It seems to fit what you're looking for here. I'd suggest changing it to match the Structure template as it doesn't appear to really function as a city on its own.
Description | This field isn't filled out, it still has the template placeholder next to it. Would you mind filling it out with a general description of Shima Temple please?
 

Ylla Caeli'runa

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Lovely, thank you very much for those changes! Enjoy!


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