[member="Lupe Baracka"]
Hmm... I would say the rapping wasn't too... bad. But it could get a lot better. At the moment it's too monotonous, in some places even famous rappers use the power which is used in singing. Dynamics and expressing emotions could help a lot. Most famous rappers have a unique, interesting voice. While you can rap, your voices weren't as powerful and special as they could be. To be honest, I would suggest a different genre of music, but I'm not going to do that because I can see you want to be rappers. So a little tip - train, train, train, and add power to your rapping, add variation. Because timbre is something which is your own, it can't be changed like that. And since your voices aren't that special, interesting things could be added.
Also, rapping can be made more catchy if there are choruses which are actually singed out. Just sayin'.
So here's a short overview of what I tried to say (and some more tips):
- some words or phrases need more "special treatment" aka power, emotions, stress, etc.
- rapping is the most interesting when the rapper has a super unique voice (something not heard before). If this area lacks, use the previous tip.
- (singing choruses would be a great way to make the song more interesting.)
- a rapper's vocabulary should be really broad.
- train your rapping, train your voice every day and try to find something which brings out the best of your voice.
