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Factory Denied Slip Drive

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Niamh Raste

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  • Intent: To create an alternative to a hyperdrive.
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  • Primary Source: Tumble Hyperdrive, Aang-Tii
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  • Function: Taking cue's from both the tumble hyperdrive and known Aang-Tii technology, the slip drive operates quite similarly to how a hyperdrive does. It creates a bubble around the ship that pulls the ship into a separate dimension. While the hyperdrive allows faster than light travel through use of an alternate dimension, it isn't the 4th dimension (the time dimension). A slip drive utilizes this dimension, pulling the ship out of time, and allowing nearly instantaneous (milliseconds) travel between two points in the 3D plane of existence that is otherwise occupied. Because all time exists together in the 4th dimension, it allows instantaneous travel between two points. It does have its risks and limitations, as outlined below, but the benefits often outweigh the risks as long as the drive is used properly.
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  • Near instantaneous travel between two points in space.
  • Does not leave a trail for someone to follow the way a hyperspace jump does.
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  • Traveling great distances runs the risk of trapping you within the time dimension as the power levels needed to sustain the protective bubble around the ship are excessive and the field can only be sustained for a few milliseconds. It's impossible to use this to travel the entire length of the galaxy in a single jump.
  • Multiple-jumps requires time. Yes, you can jump between two points instantly, but the capacitors need to be recharged after each jump and this can take upwards of an hour. Thus, if the battle you're needing to get to is on the other side of the galaxy, you still won't get there in time to be of use.
  • Point occupancy is an issue. If you are traveling between two points and the point you wish to get to is occupied by another ship or some other large body, when you exit the time dimension you'll generally impact with the object to the detriment of your vessel and possibly whatever you contact.
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While traditional hyperdrive are effective, the Echani prefer to do things swiftly and without warning. Hyperdrive jumps can be tracked, detected, and can take a long time between locations, meaning they aren't fast or stealthy. In order to combat this, studies were done of the tumble hyperdrive and Aang-Tii living technology, with the help of Force-sensitive Echani, to study and understand how both systems work. The end result of this study was the design of the Slip Drive. This drive operates in a similar fashion to both technologies but takes the vessel into the fourth dimension rather than the hyperspace dimension. In so doing, it allows for near-instantaneous travel between two points but is limited by distance due to the power draw of the system. This was deemed an acceptable compromised and the design was moved forward to minor production for inclusion on Echani and Directorate vessels.
 
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Niamh Raste

Wow! This is a very well-made submission, and quite honestly, I am impressed. That said however, as much of a fan of awesome tech as I am, Chaos has certain rules that I am obliged to enforce. Among those rules are strict prohibitions against teleportation and time travel. This submission allows for the first using tech based around the second. So, unfortunately, as this stands I would have no other choice but to deny it on this premise alone.

I will however hold back on denial, and give you the opportunity to amend this submission to better conform to Chaos rules. Of course how you do that will be up to you, and I will help in any way I can. Please, let me know what you'd like to do with this sub. Again, I earnestly agonized over the profound admiration I have for this submission and the rules I must enforce. You did an amazing job with this.

Please let me know what you want to do. Thank you.

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Visanj T'shkali Visanj T'shkali
Could you please provide me with the location of the rule banning teleportation? This doesnt allow time travel, just displacement using time, so I dont believe it would fall under that rule.
 
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Under banned items as this constitutes "Hypergate Technology", which is forbidden under present site rules. This may not utilize time travel, however the technology you enumerate encompasses 4th Dimension travel to allow instantaneous travel over great distances. Both are forbidden technologies on Chaos.
 

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Visanj T'shkali Visanj T'shkali
I decline to agree. This isnt a hypergate. While this may allow NEAR instantaneous travel (and Im willing to make it somewhat longer), it requires an hour cooldown. Thats a pretty serious disadvantage if you jump into a fight and start losing and are unable to get away.

Aang-Tii technology is not banned and allows for near-instantaneous travel. Additionally there are Force abilities that allow for teleportation.
 
Niamh Raste

As I said, I very much like and admire the technology you have created, and appreciate how innovative and well-made this submission is.

Unfortunately, this is not the first time similar technologies have been submitted and in every case, they have failed to pass muster to avoid denial. Aing-Ti technology is not in and of itself forbidden on Chaos, however this element is and always has been.

I am sorry, and you may request a second chance as per Factory Rules, but since you have made clear you do not intend to make edits to this submission I have no other choice.

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