Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos
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Sparda C.C Seraphim
- Thread starter C.C
- Start date
The Admiralty
No wolf?
Oh my goodness, the bio is sooooooooo cool! 
*loves*
*loves*Aurelio Murtix
The Ambitious Noble
Interesting and well layered character!
And the pictures and other graphics really make it pop, which is AWESOME!
And the pictures and other graphics really make it pop, which is AWESOME!
Seanna Vel
Fiery Vixen
Let the games begin!!!!!
Kaiden Rohn
Fallen Soul
Weighing only 100 pounds, his muscles don't have to carry much weight
He could lift about ten times as much as a strong man. A strong man can bench press about 250kg and C.C, if he would try, could lift about 2500kg (the weight of a large car).
lolwut
He could lift about ten times as much as a strong man. A strong man can bench press about 250kg and C.C, if he would try, could lift about 2500kg (the weight of a large car).
lolwut
Ayden Cater
Grumpy Goat
This seems ridiculously over the top, and probably needs a Species sub to fully cover everything that's going on here. There is nothing in Shistavanen or Echani Wookie pages that would be indicative of being capable of lifting more than two tons or capable of sustained running at 75 MPH, at 5' 11" and 100 pounds.
Kaiden Rohn
Fallen Soul
^totesAyden Cater said:
also this quote:
"Dogs do as their told...wolves go where they please."
wolves travel in packs, so maybe if you want to make this more about sparda being more of a lone wolf character, or maybe about being the alpha wolf or something like that instead of being about dogs. plus everyone likes dogs.
i'm done, I swear
It said in the Wookie that they had Enhanced senses, Increased speed, Increased strength and Healing abilities. So i took the things a normal human could do, and doubled it. Humans have been known to run at 75MHP, 75mph is as fast as a cheetah. So it's not as ridiculous as it might seem at first glance.Ayden Cater said:
Wilhelm Pashum
Military, Merchant, Refugee
C.C said:
Like they said, you really overdid it.C.C said:
The Wolf
C.C said:
simply untrue. the fastest human ever- Usain Bolt.
The fastest human footspeed on record is 44.72 km/h (12.42m/s, 27.44 mph), seen during a 100 meters sprint (average speed between the 60th and the 80th meter) by Usain Bolt.[4]
The wookie did not state that a Near-human could break the land speed record. Neither of those two species, could really do anything substantial. The only thing that could be said is that the Shistvanen or whatever, could run for a very long time. That also being said, I don't think the DNA of the two would be compatible for any sort of research or development, but hey, it's your character.
I understand you want to make a unique and powerful character, but there exists many things in the universe of Star Wars that could cover this without you having to break all logic and disregard science and biology. If you want to have a very strong and very fast character, I suggest going the route that [member="Ember Rekali"] did and go with force enhancement.
If you know it's bad, why are you doing it?C.C said:
Lord of Girth
Guys if he is in the wrong, then let the admins/RPJs/Factory judges talk to him about it. Voicing what others have already said just makes it more work for C.C,
I will now take my leave.
*flashes into ash*
I will now take my leave.
*flashes into ash*
Ashin Varanin
Professional Enabler
Guys...there's a way to give guidance when it's needed. This ain't it. Sssh.
[member="C.C"]
If you want your character to be physically superior to a baseline human in a significant way, submit him in the Species forum. The simpler way, though, would just be to say that he's fractionally stronger and faster than normal, without assigning numbers to it. I'd definitely recommend not lifting cars.
[member="C.C"]
If you want your character to be physically superior to a baseline human in a significant way, submit him in the Species forum. The simpler way, though, would just be to say that he's fractionally stronger and faster than normal, without assigning numbers to it. I'd definitely recommend not lifting cars.
Not Ordo
Just under the upper hand.
I like all that thought and effort you put into your character. It takes a lot to build a good bio and character, so good work. I hope that whatever you choose to do with it works out.