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Approved Starship Stealth Corvette Silencieux

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a stealth ship for the NIO and House Haskler's Navies
  • Image Source: here
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  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: here , here and here
  • Primary Source: Uchhuu Senkan Yamato 2199, Jigen Senkan UX-01
PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

  • Classification: Corvette
  • Length:144m
  • Width: 14m
  • Height: 16m
  • Armament: Average
8 Stiletto Torpedo Launchers (6 at the bow and 2 at the aft)
10 Kaeshana III CIWS
2 RMC-M7 Heavy Laser Cannon (turret-mounted, one on the front and one on the aft)
  • Defenses: Average | Hull, Deflector shields, MXC-T26 Yggdrasil Cloaking Device and countermeasures (flares)
  • Hangar Space: High | 0 squadron
  • Hangar Allocations: N/A
  • Single Craft Hangar: Yes (1 Rei-sen type starfighter)
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very High
  • Speed Rating: Very High
  • Hyperdrive: 0.9 hyperdrive
STANDARD FEATURES

  • All standard features
  • Possibility to land on planets
  • Possibility to go underwater like a submarine due to its shape.
ADVANCED SYSTEMS

  • Cloaking device
  • Hangar space for a single craft.
STRENGTHS

  • Silent Hunter: Being stealth makes this ship undetected when getting out of hyperspace or when firing.
  • Can launch and recover a single starfighter.
WEAKNESSES

  • This ship must disable its cloaking device when launching or recovering the launched craft, making her detectable for a short moment.
DESCRIPTION
This new ship is made to escort silently large fleets or to get behind ennemy defense lines lines undetected. It can tranport up to 20 passengers.
 
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Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala

Interesting ship! I found some problems:
  • First, please link the permissions to the permissions and not after the weapons/cloaking device.
  • Please link the primary sources too.
  • The Carbon nanofilament is very rare, please link this too.
  • The ship is overpowered, +3 rating, please fix this.
  • And the permissions, your permissions (weapons and cloaking device) are only enough for one ship, not for the limited scale. So please change the ship to unique or go back and ask more equipment.
  • And with the cloaking device the ships can be only semi-unique and not limited. So please fix this too.
That's all, please let me know if you edited these.
 
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Gustaf Karjala Gustaf Karjala

  • Nope, it still +3. It's a bug, if you're extended the table to show the ratings you can see. You can see here.
  • We're currently testing the new spreadsheet what I made, here you can see better why it's +3.
  • The High - 0 squadrons is 0 point, the very high is +1 and the exteme is +2.
  • So your ratings:
    • Unique: -4 (0 in the old one)
    • High: +1 (4 in the old one)
    • Average: 0 (3 in the old one)
    • Extreme: 2x3 = +6 (6-6 in the old one)
    • Sum: -4+1+6 = +3
Everything else is good, thank you!
 
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