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Approved NPC StormTrooper Conserves(Standard)

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt][To press fear into the enemies hearts and fill their minds with terror, to protect their loyal citizens and used for military strategies and the main part of The [/SIZE]Forgotten Defeat ]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Image Credit: [/SIZE]Stormtrooper
  • [SIZE=9pt]Links: [/SIZE]Forgotten Defeat

[SIZE=9pt]GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]COMBAT INFORMATION[/SIZE]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Availability: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt][[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Common- A typical unit that's seen out on the battlefields, even seen a-lot on bases and defensive sides. Having about 1000 of them, out of 1500-8950 in total ground troops. There's a good amount of them as their special abilities come with each different soldier and an intellectual brain power for all of them.[/SIZE]
  • Deployment: [Massive- Being majorly produced and trained in this Empire, they are very good for battles and are used mostly as the main part of the battle. Having millions of them they come in 2 plantoons for each huge battle]
  • [SIZE=9pt]Strengths & Weaknesses:[/SIZE]


Numbers: Being so huge in numbers they are deadly in battle, even when in single 1v1 combat, they are well trained
Training: Being pushed through 10 years of hard training, learning, and fighting skills, even coming up with their own. Taking the example from clones, and watching battles and seeing footage of great saber skills from Jedi-Sith and Mandalorians.
Testing: Being tested meant, you either pass and go on into the military or fail and don't succeed, this pushed the men of this empire to the greatest achievements, those who pass are promoted or are honored. The high ranks were given by brain power and skill in battle.
Never Paranoid No Pain: Having the intentions of not getting scared comes along a great value, when shot and or hurt they're not always knocked down unconscious and can deal with pain/trained to do so.

Over Confident: Some troopers got cocky, which will lead to bad choices and selfish behavior.
Impatient: Some Storm Troopers lack motivation and or are usually to impatient heading out into battle, some do a battle scream and get to excited showing the position of their teammates and or would be the one to jump out in front of enemy barrages and cover fire.
Short Tempered: Some of them even carry to much aggravation and hold too much adrenaline, and usually go all out at the enemy or is easily angered by higher ups which isn't allowed, and will be removed. Their lack in understanding is a failure, as these are just the standard troopers, they don't commonly think intellectually, only the higher ranks are seen to have such mind power.

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Coming into place around 834 ABY the start of the Forgotten Defeat they were tested and recruited, earning their armor and being named who and what they are today. Being highly trained in the Forgotten Defeat and a major impact and importance of this Empire, born and specifically trained from the template of an old important character of the rebellion, taking skills from Han Solo and the other rebels, even studying past Imperial Records, and taking the studies of Trandoshans and their great allies Nardoshians. They served under Highly trained mercenaries, and or blades men, and commonly lead into battle by force users and Mandalorians.
 
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Tarishee said:
Having about 10 million of them, out of 15 million in total ground troops

I'm sorry, but I don't believe a minor faction would be able to maintain this amount of troops. Please remove this from the submission.
 

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Feeto Chivaro said:
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I'm sorry, but I don't believe a minor faction would be able to maintain this amount of troops. Please remove this from the submission.
Done
 
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Tarishee said:
Having about 1 million of them, out of 1.4 million in total ground troops


Tarishee said:
Having millions of them they come in 3 battalions

Your best bet would be to remove all references to a numbered strength in this submission. Again, a minor faction does not typically get to field millions or even hundreds of thousands of soldiers.
 
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Tarishee said:
saber skills from Jedi-Sith
I don't think it's appropriate for a unit of this size to have been tutored in lightsaber combat. Please remove this.



Tarishee said:
even lead along to making great strategic choices during battle

This seems to contradict with their weaknesses of impatient and overconfident.
 

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Feeto Chivaro said:
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I don't think it's appropriate for a unit of this size to have been tutored in lightsaber combat. Please remove this.





This seems to contradict with their weaknesses of impatient and overconfident.
They didn't learn physically and hand to hand experience, they watched footage and old footage.
Also, clones have a few that have good leadership, but also a few that are impatient in battle.
 
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If they didn't physically learn it, then it doesn't belong in the submission either.

Strengths and weaknesses are meant to convey the collective strengths and weaknesses of the unit. If these strengths and weaknesses only apply to some but not all of the members of the unit, then you'll need to rethink them as well.
 

Tarishee

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Feeto Chivaro said:
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If they didn't physically learn it, then it doesn't belong in the submission either.

Strengths and weaknesses are meant to convey the collective strengths and weaknesses of the unit. If these strengths and weaknesses only apply to some but not all of the members of the unit, then you'll need to rethink them as well.
Done. Thanks
 

Tarishee

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Feeto Chivaro said:
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If they didn't physically learn it, then it doesn't belong in the submission either.

Strengths and weaknesses are meant to convey the collective strengths and weaknesses of the unit. If these strengths and weaknesses only apply to some but not all of the members of the unit, then you'll need to rethink them as well.
Done sir
 
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