Star Wars Roleplay: Chaos

Register a free account today to become a member! Once signed in, you'll be able to participate on this site by adding your own topics and posts, as well as connect with other members through your own private inbox!

Approved NPC Suzie Happy Home Wrecker

Status
Not open for further replies.
Name: Suzie (Happy Home Wrecker) Atlas
Loyalties: Unaffiliated.
Role: Someone who will drive Warren to the dark side of the Force. She is also a tech saboteur.
Development Threads: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/77849-shielding-solutions-pm-for-invite/
Age: 20
Species: Human/Zeltron hybrid
Force Sensitivity: None
Appearance:


KEhleyr-Zeltron.jpg




Personality: Typically Suzie pretends to be nice and charming to her prey until she gets them off guard. When she weakens her opponent's will power she changes into a merciless shrew who uses her lips, and her whip to strike her opponents and eliminate them before they can do anything to defend themselves. She is merciless, and enjoys selling the inventions of others and claiming credit for them, even if it isn't so. Suzie also can assume a variety of different personalities, whatever she needs in order to charm her opponents into submission so she can take them out.



Weapon of Choice:
Light Whip, and a variety of lipsticks.


Wealth: Fairly well off.
Combat Function: She is highly good at sabotaging machines. She is also good at annoying people until they decide to focus on attacking her.
Skills:

- Hand to Hand Combat (Tai Chi)
- Lightwhip Expert
- Seduction
- Technological sabotage

Weapon of Choice: A pink and purple lightwhip with a chrome handle.


Notable Possessions:


  • A Pink speeder

  • Love Dust

  • Pets that attack machinery
Other Notes:

Abandoned in the desert when she was young on Tatooine, Suzie is a half zeltron half human hybrid. With no knowledge of her parents, she decided that at the age of 12 if she could not have nice things... no one could. So over time she started sabotaging people. Convincing a Jedi who came to the world with the aid of pheromones, and feminine wiles to teach her about the lightsaber, she persuaded him to build her a light-whip. Once she had persuaded the Jedi to make the light-whip she did something worthy of the dark side of the Force and killed him with it.

After that, she's started to sabotage the labs of inventors and make their lives living nightmares while she steals their innovations, and then tries to sell them. Right now she's started to target Warren Century more than she should.


Intent: It provides an antagonist for Warren, and a bit of a plotline of him throwing her out of his lab on a regular basis. She’s going to be the reason he embraces the dark side of the Force.
 
[member="Warren Century"]

So I'm going to ask something before I really get into judging this submission as after reading it over three times, it still leaves the same impression on me:
  • Was it your intention to make someone that is almost essentially Deedee from Dexter's Laboratory?
 
[member="Warren Century"]

I'm going to leave it to you to ponder and make changes, but please do so as it is close enough to the character as it stands it could be construed as plagiarism.
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Users who are viewing this thread

Top Bottom