Tech Review Sword Herald Bio-Adaptive Heart V.1

[Laertia Io]

• Intent: to create a Mass Produced Bionic Heart
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Sword Herald Special Purpose Enterprises
• Affiliation: Sword Herald Special Purpose Enterprises
• Market Status: Open
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: No
• Production: Mass Produced
• Material: Modified Vong Biot Genetic Material

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Genetically engineered adaptive Heart
• Size: Small (Size of a fist)
• Weight: Average
• Resistances (Optional):
  • Energy: None
  • Kinetic: None
  • EMP/Ion: Very High
  • Lightsabers: Low
  • Flame: Very High
  • Cryo: Very High
  • Sonic: Low
  • Radiation: High
  • Acid: None
  • Magnetic: High
  • Lightning: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

High Performance Heart built to resist unconventional damage.
Conveys double the User's normal Stamina.
Perfectly suitable as either primary or back up heart.
Capable of self repair...releases special enzymes that can keep a user alive and preserve Brain Functions for up to 48 hours until it repairs (Though the user will be helpless and appear dead) and constantly filters blood
Can regulate body temperature if it senses signs of Frost Bite or Heat Stroke.
If it senses a high radiation zone, will release protective enzymes that breakdown radioactive particles on the skin and the inside of the body for a short time, allowing one to survive and irradiated zone (or at least have a higher chance of it)
Adapts to the genetics of any Organic it is installed in.



STRENGTHS

1. A lotta Heart, Kid: This heart is perfectly suited to being either a primary or secondary heart, and adapts itself to the genetics of any being it is implanted in, so it is perfectly suited to them no matter what, granting double the stamina they normally have (Or four times that if they have two)
2. Fixit: The heart is able to fully heal itself from severe damage over the course of 24 hours, releasing a special enzymes that preserves living tissue and all brain functions, keeping user alive in a comatose state for up to 48 hours while the heart repairs
3. Unconventional: Greatly resistant to stress, electricity, Ion and EMP, high and low temperature environments, by regulating the body when severe temperature stress is detected, regulating it. In highly radiological environments, it breaks down radiological particles on the skin and insides by releasing enzymes that seek out Radiation contaminants in the body, massing on eve one particle when detected, granting user a much high chance to survive and escape a highly radiological area for up to one hour before the Heart needs 48 hours to recharge more enzyme reserves, Due to being crafted from Vong Biot genetics. The thing has its own sensory nodes and micro productions sacks in its layers of tissue that produce the aforementioned effects, all without requiring increased blood flow or oxygen due to its own miniature nervous system constantly tuning itself to its hosts needs


WEAKNESSES

1. Energy: Just as vulnerable to blasters as normal hearts
2. Slugthrower Rounds: No resistance to bullets either
3. Helplessness: If the heart is severely injured it will eventually repair, even releasing emergency Life Preservation enzymes...but the injured person is completely helpless and can easily be finished off by a cautious attacker
4. Acid: Acid Burns right through it.
5. Sonics: Being shot by sound weapons greatly reduces it's protective properties and stamina increasing abilities for 48 hours



DESCRIPTION

Sword Herald Adaptive Hearts-feel like you're worth six million credits without having to actually pay that much!

--sales pitch


The Mass Produced Artificial Heart by Sword Herald is geared to resisting unconventional damage that would wreck most Conventional Bionic Hearts, providing a better chance for customers to survive attacks by Force Users, even if only by the skin of their teeth. Can be installed as either a primary or secondary heart

 

[Krass Wyms]

Laertia Io

Hello, I shall be handling this sub

Lets start off with the main glaring issue. Using Ysalamiri Genetic Material doesn't copy the effects. The creature was required to be alive for it to function. Miriskin. It needs to be alive. Without a canon citation of the creature having the function when not within the living creature. Force nullification will have to be removed.

The next is that this doesn't read like an artifical heart that is stronger then an average (which would bring a slew of other prospects like a need for increased bloodflow, oxygen) how is the heart able to detect the different statuses of radiation and damage to do all of these special function?

 

[Krass Wyms]

Laertia Io what is the status of this submission

 

[Laertia Io]

Need two more days, really busy, Krass Wyms

 

[Laertia Io]

Need another day, Krass Wyms . Schedule is just interfering

 

[Laertia Io]

Reworded and went into detail, Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Laertia Io

Thank you

Organ grafting: The vong technique for replacing organs was an entire living creature. Not cherry picked genetic materials. Just having formless vong creatures wouldn't do much as you still need to shape them. Being shaped and grown for a purpose could allow for better resistance or improved functionality but it would be larger and need to be more complicated to do both. A nervous system would also not address a heart pumping blood at higher volumes to increase the stamina of another. You would still need to oxygenate the blood and increase how much is produced to carry it to the unaugmented muscles in the body.

All of the weaknesses here are not much of a weakness, a heart would be within the body giving it a layer of protection with flesh bone and if these are being used in neutralizers metal on top of all their resistances. Then add armor, shielding. You are going to need weaknesses that can be a factor rather then non-weaknesses easily countered by other basic parts of the ones who are going to use it.

THis honestly needs a large rewrite, I haven't even gone into the resistances which have multiple that are contradictory. No energy resistance while lightning and lightsabers which are considered energy have more resistance. This would have to be changed. The vong tissue is not really thought out and I would just drop it as a living biot without a means to feed itself is going to die in the body. The weaknesses need to be reworked and actually factor into the sub.

So I am going to return this to the pre-factory so that you can work on this at your own pace.