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Approved Tech Synthetic Ankarres

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To craft a Synthetic Healing Crystal for sale
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber Crystal (Synthetic)
  • Weight: Very Light
  • Color: Pale Blue Stone with asterism. Installed in a lightsaber, produces a robins egg blue blade, even down to the core.
  • Resistances: Energy: None
  • Kinetic: None
  • Ion/EMP: None
  • Acid: None
  • Vibro: None
  • Flame: None
  • Cryo: None
  • Lightning: None
  • Poison: High
  • Disease: High
SPECIAL FEATURES

Installed in Lightsaber, the blade becomes unable to kill, but passes through the body harmlessly and painlessly stunning it if swiped through the body very quickly

Lightsaber Blade's light constantly heals all Light Adepts in a fifteen meter radius at the rate of three Bio-Restorative Underlays

When slowly plunged and held into an injured person, heals the person being stabbed, no matter how severe their injuries are, instead of a stun effect, as the body harmonizes and adapts to blade energy

Slightly boosts the strength of all Light Side Abilities

High resistance to disease and poison when not installed in a Lightsaber

STRENGTHS

No Lightsaber? No problem: Even uninstalled this Crystal is highly useful, rendering one highly resistant to Diseases and Poison, and heals even very serious wounds at the rate of one Bio-Restorative Underlay. This means outside a lightsaber, it can heal severe injuries in a span of generally 007 hours

Booster: Slightly boosts the strength of Light Side Abilities

Stab to heal: Normally, when the blade passes quickly through the body, the nervous system is painlessly stunned as it happens too quickly for the body to properly adapt . However, If slowly plunged and held into an injured body the body adapts to its energy and harmonizes with it, enabling it to rapidly, painlessly heal very serious wounds in a span of minutes

Into the Light, in a Lightsaber, the Light it emits heals all Light Adepts, including user, at the rate of three bio restorative underlays in a fifteen meter radius, enabling even severe wounds to heal in at least 21 minutes


WEAKNESSES

Slugthrower: Slugthrowers ammo still splashes the blade

Weak cut: The properties that render it unable to kill fortunately do not prevent it from cutting through Conventional Materials or Saber resistant materials, bug it takes double to triple the strikes

Sonics: Sonics travel through the blades

Force Voids: Won't function in them

Paddle Beams: Paddle beams travel around the blade

No Reflect: It can absorb, but not deflect blaster bolts

DESCRIPTION



Synthetic Ankarres: For the determined Jedi behind enemy lines who wants healing not sanctioned by the Council.

-Sales Pitch


The Synthetic Ankarres is an artificial Lightsaber Crystal that's had the light forcibly infused to it, to produce much more potent than normal healing effects. While Light Adepts will not sense anything amiss with the crystal (They are at no risk of it altering their minds) the fact remains that many Light Adepts would be much more wary of this product if they knew it was forged by the Serpents of Ashla
 
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Three issues.

  • Production: Mass Produced
  • Material: Synthetic Lightsaber Crystal
Force Crystals cannot be mass produced though they can be just Semi-Unique while Open Market.

  • Resistances: Extreme resistance to disease when uninstalled. Constant low strength healing effect when uninstalled
This was done wrong. I understand your intention but something more like this:

Kinetic: None
Energy: Extreme
Disease: Extreme
Ion: None
Disruptor: None
Force: Low

Get the idea? You are over two ratings making it Very Light so play around with some common ones I mentioned above or create other like Electricity, Cold, Heat, ect.

Installed in Lightsaber, the blade becomes unable to kill, but passes through the body harmlessly and painlessly stunning it,

When plunged and held into an injured person, heals the person being stabbed, no matter how severe their injuries are, instead of a stun effect

No Lightsaber? No problem: Even uninstalled this Crystal is highly useful, rendering one nearly immune to all but Alchemized Diseases and Poison, and heals even very serious wounds at the rate of one Bio-Restorative Underlay

Booster: Slightly boosts the strength of Light Side Abilities

Stab to heal: If plunged and held into an injured body, it rapidly, painlessly heals very serious wounds.
This needs to be clarified. The first two contradict so I will just put it this way. Does it heal people when whacking them with it or stun them? It should be either one and not the other.

As for rates of healing...I have personally no experience with Bio-Restorative-Underlay. Perhaps it be better to use a different kind of term like minutes or hours?


Let me know when you fix these and we can move on.
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