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Approved Tech Tactical Fighting Blade

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Miss Blonde

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Tactical Fighting Blade


OOC Info
Image Source:
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Intent: To provide the galaxy with a quality phrik blade.
Development Thread: X

Blade Info
Manufacturer: Reclaimer Arms & Industrial
Model: NA
Affiliation: Open Market
Modularity: None
Production: Limited
Material: Phrik
Classification: Sword
Size: One or two handed
Length: 80cm
Weight: 3kg
Special Features:
•Lightsaber Resistant

Blade Description
Description: Lightsabers keeping you down? Slicing through all your weapons with little ways to fend against them? Well those days are over with the Tactical Fighting Blade, a weapon designed to be a lightweight razor sharp solution to the NFU's bane.

How it's built. Like any other sword the phrik ore is melted down and turned into purified ingots where they are crafted into this blade. It's your standard black smithing process and there's nothing special that goes into the creation of these blades.

Power. Razor sharp, light, and deadly. These are some of the words to describe this blade. It's a great blade and will do the job of piercing and stabbing most light and medium armors, but heavy thick plate armor can prove difficult for the blade to puncture, other rare metal armor like Beskar for example can stand up to the blade easily. However it's real strength comes from the material, capable of stopping lightsabers the Tactical Blade will excel in that area due to it being strong and sturdy against lightsabers and will perform wonderfully.

Drawbacks. As far as swords go it's more of a short sword, and it's not horribly thick. It's designed to slash and stab with speed and precision against sabers so when it comes to other more powerful blades and weapons such as hammers and axes it is quite possible for the blade to be overpowered by other metal based weapons. Another weakness would be that it's not going to do anything when it comes to force powers so they will effect it like any other sword, it won't block lightning and will actually conduct electricity.

Summary. Overall it's a good basic blade that can cut down your opponents and block lightsabers, there's not much else to it besides that.
 
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
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[member="Miss Blonde"]

Good evening, I'll be your judge tonight!

Let's see what we have here:
- First and foremost, solid submission.

- In the third paragraph, you state: "...will do the job of piercing and stabbing most armors..." If you could add a clarifying statement in the same paragraph detailing the extent of its cutting power (i.e. Comparable to a sword, etc.) That would be appreciated. While you and I know that this submission isn't attempting to sneak any excessive cutting power in, I want your customers to be absolutely aware of this.

- The lack of alchemical treatment isn't a weakness. Could you remove this please?

Make those minor tweaks and we're in business.
 
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