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Approved Tech Beskar'kandar of Tayl Vizsla

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Multipurpose heavy armor
  • Weight: Heavy
  • Resistances:
    • Energy: Extreme
    • Kinetic: Extreme
    • Lightsabers: Extreme
    • EMP\Ion: None
    • Extreme Heat: Very High
    • Extreme Cold: Very Low
    • Electrical: None
    • Acidic: Very High
SPECIAL FEATURES

HELMET:
STRENGTHS

  • Duraplast internals protect helmet neural-link & systems
  • Pure beskar construction offers incredible resistance to Energy, lightsaber, kinetic and even heat-based weaponry.
  • Kinetic gel lining in the flak vest is capable of absorbing high caliber ballistic rounds and similar kinetic force
WEAKNESSES

  • No EMP\Ion protection on body armor, preventing individual pieces from communicating with the neural-link in the event of short-circuiting
  • Heavily armored construction leaves gaps behind the knees and under the shoulders, elbows and the buttocks
  • Kinetic gel vest and lining breaks on impacts or burns, in the event of sustained and targeted damage, the vest can be bypassed
  • Lekku(head tail) sleeves do not offer adequate protection to prevent unconsciousness from anything beyond the strength small-arms fire and vibroweapons.
DESCRIPTION
A suit of heavily customized Beskar'gam expertly crafted by the warsmiths of the Enclave and House Vizsla, with a story to tell in every piece. The Helmet itself was constructed to Tayl's specifications under the supervision of her mother, Aloy Vizsla, who was gifted a singular ingot of Beskar by a Jademar Earisa, The daughter of a long dead thief perhaps, and Tayl's sister in spirit.

The rest of the Beskar was acquired long after the Helmet's construction, stolen from a train under guard by NIO Stormtroopers on Mandalore shortly after the fall of the Mandalorian Union which her mother Aloy had once served. This was during her time serving with the Deathwatch Crusade in secret, which has since become known to her associates. She even wears her old pauldron in blue, with the Death Watch shriek hawk painted in worn white. On the opposite shoulder is the red flowered branch of Clan Vizsla, which she proudly represented during her time as brief service as a Crusader.

On her belt hangs the rank plaques of Imperial officers she has personally killed. The first is an army lieutenant killed during the battle. Her first kill, and the only one of only a few worth keeping a trophy for, at least in day to day life. The other, painted in all blue, is that of a fallen Stormtrooper captain killed during the battle above Kestri.

The only other items she carries with pride are her double holsters, one carrying her personal dueling pistol, and the other for a secondary pistol whenever precision is required. She also wears a red military scarf not unlike her mother's. A personal gift from Aloy, to match the one given to her by her own adoptive mother before.

Finally, She still wears a blue pauldron of painted Beskar on her right shoulder. This was given to her as a reward by the children of the watch after her battle on ordo, and serves as a reminder to herself of the old ways, and a warning to others.


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Tae'l Vizsla Tae'l Vizsla

Nicely made, but I found some problems:
  • I know it is your art, I'm still envy your talent, please link your Artstation page to the image source.
  • Please link your bio to the Affiliation.
  • Market Status, this is Open or Closed, please edit.
  • The "bladed" resistance is kinetic, so please remove that resistance.
 
FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: EE-5 Particle Carbine
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: Due IC events and faction changes, I would like to update the affiliation, reference images and any broken images\links in this and the following submissions.

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: PK-45 "Peacekeeper" hybrid pistol
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above]

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Vizsla Dueling beskad & kal
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above]

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Ml.II "Starfire" Plasmathrower
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above] I also want to revert the name to "Plasma-caster" as it rolls off the tongue better >.>

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Tayl's Beskar'gam :: Unchained
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: [See Above] I would also like to update it in line with IC events

FACTORY MODIFICATION TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Apex: cybernetic anatomical system
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxxx
Reason for Factory Modification Request: I would like to completely rebalance this submission by removing certain components and altering the strengths accordingly

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FACTORY ARCHIVAL TEMPLATE
Submission Name: "Starfire" gauntlet plasma-caster
Link to Submission: xxxxxxxx
Reason for Archival Request: This is now obsolete due to the Mk.II variant
 
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CHANGELOG:
  • Altered div code
  • Image edit
  • Updated model
    • Updated special features:
      • M.I. "Hunter seeker" fire control system
      • Mk.2 "Predator" scan pulse
      • Howlrunner.exe
      • Armorweave skirt
      • various gription panels
      • Solarium Glasteel Visor
      • Double bladed boots
      • Dragonsnake-hide lekku armor
  • Updated lekku armor weakness
  • Replaced transparisteel with solarium glasteel
  • Minor description update
  • Updated permissions
  • Reverted technical specifications from image to text
  • Altered submission name
  • Removed radiation screener
  • Removed redundant breathing apparatus
    • Removed associated strenth
    • Removed associated weakness
  • Added missing kinetic strength

Ready for live judgement
 
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