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So I've been writing Adron for about a year and a half now. It's definitely time for a review from a few of my peers. However first I'm going to go into a few self-critiques in areas where I believe I can improve as a writer. As far as the character himself, personally I adore Adron. he's really grown out of his broody teen with a grudge into a confident nobleman and empowered Sith Lord. He's advancing into the deeper works of the Sith magic as he strives to take the position of Vicelord of The Confederacy. Certainly a character that has had impeccable progression in the last few months.
1. Depth- Generally I like to think I can paint a scene and really give you a clear picture of what I am conveying. However as posts go on and the threads continue I seem to decline on the depth and perhaps the quality of my posts. This can be caused by a lot of things, one of the biggest things being a long break in between posts, however it seems when I change from posting on my computer to posting on my phone there is a big difference. I'll try to maintain that quality we all love!
2. Format- So if you follow me you'll notice I use different formats for different threads. Not so much font or text size. However, text "speech" color and the format of the post as a whole can vary from thread to thread however I try to at least keep them consistent within the thread itself. Though I do fall short In that category sometimes as well.
3. Response/Drive- I really need to get more regular in my posts. A bit of it is time management but sometimes I just stare at a thread for literal hours with no clue on how to get a good post out. When that happens I usually abandon it all together and just wait for the next day and hope for a better drive to post. How do ya'll handle that? Would love some tips or tricks for this area.
These are just some things I think my general writing over all could use. However if there are any other things you notice I'd appreciate you taking the moment and provide me with some constructive feedback on me, Adron, or anything else you think will help me. Thanks Chaos!
1. Depth- Generally I like to think I can paint a scene and really give you a clear picture of what I am conveying. However as posts go on and the threads continue I seem to decline on the depth and perhaps the quality of my posts. This can be caused by a lot of things, one of the biggest things being a long break in between posts, however it seems when I change from posting on my computer to posting on my phone there is a big difference. I'll try to maintain that quality we all love!
2. Format- So if you follow me you'll notice I use different formats for different threads. Not so much font or text size. However, text "speech" color and the format of the post as a whole can vary from thread to thread however I try to at least keep them consistent within the thread itself. Though I do fall short In that category sometimes as well.
3. Response/Drive- I really need to get more regular in my posts. A bit of it is time management but sometimes I just stare at a thread for literal hours with no clue on how to get a good post out. When that happens I usually abandon it all together and just wait for the next day and hope for a better drive to post. How do ya'll handle that? Would love some tips or tricks for this area.
These are just some things I think my general writing over all could use. However if there are any other things you notice I'd appreciate you taking the moment and provide me with some constructive feedback on me, Adron, or anything else you think will help me. Thanks Chaos!