Tell me what you like/hate about Quinn

[Eli-Mae Forrest]

Im looking for feedback on quinn

 

[elirrocks]

try to expand during posts a little more

 

[Tanith Alde]

[member="Quinncolson"]

Quinn's author didn't bother linking her bio on her profile so tracking it down is annoying

 

[Eli-Mae Forrest]

Sorry about that

 

[Tanith Alde]

[member="Quinncolson"]

Not much of a problem, you can do it real quick and that'd help

 

[Lahi Te'ala]

Your posts are very small, and tend to give little to nothing to react to. Quinn herself has a... weird backstory, that honestly comes off a little silly 'I was trained by a legendary jedi 800 years ago!', that doesn't really seem to add anything to her as a character, besides letting you reference that you already know stuff/have been places.

That problem mostly stems, again, from your one sentence post lengths. I don't know Quinn's personality at all, because she basically just says yes or no and then walks off, doing things well... without elaboration.

So yeah, try to use the guide that was posted today on how to make more detailed posts, is my suggestion.

 

[Hestan Kantrael]

On top of what said [member="Lahi Te'ala"] (and I too suggest you to consult the holy words recollected into that guide she spoke of!) I have to tell you one thing, as Hestan would say: Bloody Core, focus! xD
Now, sergeant Hartman aside, pay attention to what has been told in the quotes you noticed the battery charge levels one post later and you gave me the impression you did not read them.