NightSister
Animus
Alright, my turn!
So, you know how these work. What am I doing well, what could I improve on as a writer and as a character, etc. I especially want to know how realistic Aria is, in personality/emotional stability/whatever and - in particular - her skill level, because back in my early days on the site I made her pretty OPed and don't want to do so again. My thread tracker's in my bio - bear in mind that a lot of the old stuff or threads that never really got anywhere have been removed, but nothing important's been missed out.
I will listen to criticism, but I will ask that if you've got a lot of not strictly positive or constructive stuff to say then please do so in a PM. Same goes for personal or OOC issues.
You may now begin!
So, you know how these work. What am I doing well, what could I improve on as a writer and as a character, etc. I especially want to know how realistic Aria is, in personality/emotional stability/whatever and - in particular - her skill level, because back in my early days on the site I made her pretty OPed and don't want to do so again. My thread tracker's in my bio - bear in mind that a lot of the old stuff or threads that never really got anywhere have been removed, but nothing important's been missed out.
I will listen to criticism, but I will ask that if you've got a lot of not strictly positive or constructive stuff to say then please do so in a PM. Same goes for personal or OOC issues.
You may now begin!