Tell the Kitty what you're thinking..... (Feedback on Ryn)

[Ryn'Dhal]

Self explanatory.

Been about a year, figured I'm due.

Here's some threads. Peruse, and tell me what you think of the Kitty-Jedi.

Training Related Threads
To Meet a Knight
Further Trainings
Circle of Protection

Action/Adventure Threads
Lost in the Dark


Drama(?)
The Day the World Fell Apart
The Path to Well-being (Writer Recommendation, bring tissue)


Happy reading! I look forward to your commentary, be they pros or cons.

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

I do wish you'd stop dragging dead animals into the house and showing them to me. It was cute at first, but now it's getting irksome, because you're not the one that has to clean up the mess.

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

[member="Tirdarius"]

Would you rather that, or I could groom myself and leave the shedding in nice, neat, damp clumps all over. Pick and choose. Pick and choose.

 

[James Justice]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

Your ugly, stinky, and cough hair balls all over my yard. Meh

For real tho' You know your one of my favorites and Ryn is great. In a world where there are seventy five and a half different shades of grey, it is wonderful to see a writer pull off the pure white knight. The only thing character wise that I don't like is--well his penchant for getting captured. <.< You'd figure that by now the bad guys would figure out that's a bad idea......

 

[Zenva Vrotoa]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

There once was a little cat and all she ate was yarn...

Honestly, we haven't written together enough but I have way to many years of seeing your writing and am well aware of how talented you are.

 

[Nima Tann]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

 

[Kenrath]

[member="Ryn'Dhal"]

Ok so I thumb'd relatively speaking through some of the included posts and I have a few points.

1. As a Master he would make a great peace time teacher. He displays quite a bit of patience and understanding. Not to mention a willingness to teacher without expecting something in return.

2. In a worn torn constant fighting galaxy he is a horrible teacher. I get the impression none of his students would be prepared for a fight. Against most Sith his students are woefully unprepared.

3. He really needs to stop getting captured..................or at least get captured by somebody who will actually have an impact on him.


p.s.

You still suck.

 

[Ryn'Dhal]

[member="Vengeance"]

Yeah, he hasn't had a lot of time to grow the teaching relationship with any individual students yet to the point where Ryn would feel ready to subject them to more practical, 'real-world' situations.

Thank you for the positive, and also for the confirmation with the 'negative', feedback.

 

[Kitty]

OMG I should totally kidnap you [member="Ryn'Dhal"]