Feedback The Big 10 Year One

[GhostOfProtocol]

13...

Good lord I was thirteen when I started here. I turn twenty four in July. I found a grey hair the other day I've been here that long. I've done all of my education and been in three jobs in the time I've been here. I've literally grown up on Chaos. It's impressive, in all fairness, that I keep being dragged back here.

In ten years I've had a few characters I'd class as successful. Kei Raxis, Caden Evesa and more recently Zachariah Conway and Kaelos Vryn . I've also had some characters we'll never mention again because by god were they dreadful. I've served as a Major Faction Admin and on the Creative Teams of a few and I've told some really good stories.

But, we're nearly ten years in and I realise that whilst I've done feedback threads for specific characters over the years I've never done one for myself as a writer specifically.

So go nuts. What's good, what's bad? What can I work on?

Let's make year 10 an improvement year ready for the next 10.

 

[Vora Kaar]

GhostOfProtocol

13 years old on the site when you joined. Like I get it. Couldn't get maidens so you came here. With the amount of effort you put in this, I can now honestly say that Tef has had child slavesWorkers. Though, there were times you just upped and disappeared, we thought you ran away so Tef wouldn't get in trouble with children labor laws.

Also, how in the hell did you find a grey hair at 24? I would ask if you were Benjamin Button, but with how often you were all angsty and emo, it might just be your hair dye finally bled out.

Your current characters are the ones you kept? You mean the pretty boy faces were what you were left over with? Your face claims look like you typed in. "Hot feminine boy model with curly hair in a smolder pose." Sure you have a hutt to balance it out with all the ugly over there. There is also the naming convention. Like, Zavva, Zayne, Zachariah, Thayren, Vyrn? All having a theme of using letters at the end of the alphabet like you were the last kid in class and never got over that. "But dude, Z and Y are like the best letters of the alphabet! its like saying Cool with a K!"

Also really? Shannon?

(Good writing, enjoyed rping with you when I did. Look forward to seeing more.)

 

[GhostOfProtocol]

Vora Kaar

Oh we’ve all missed you, welcome back.

 

[OTHERMOTH]

ha! OLDDD

 

[Okkeus Dainlei]

It has always been a pleasure to write with you! Love your style and narratives.


Also, how much longer until Caden finally ages up? It's been a while lol. Okke now has 20ish years on his former padawan

 

[Feydrik Munin]

What a time.

 

[Valery Noble]

We've recently started writing together a lot more and it has been super fun! You're great to coordinate ideas with, the writing itself is really fun, and we're also having a laugh

Time for Vera to boolie Kaelos some more

 

[Kei Amadis]

You started keen and full of life, you had imagination and drive.

Now from what i've read, and the small amount we wrote together in the later years, rich, mature characters who feel full, their personalities shining through. I look forward to seeing what you write in the future and hope you experience a lot of interesting stories.

 

[Connel Vanagor]

Great characters, even better story ideas. Alwaysa fun read. Here's to 10 more!