Approved NPC The Bloodguard

[Yaadri Osi-Yyn]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To give Venthis his own personal set of Crownguards.
• Image Credit: Here.
• Links: Crownguard.

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Unit Name: The Bloodguard
• Affiliation: Venthis Zambrano(Primarily), Zambrano family.
• Classification: Infantry.
• Equipment: Lightsaber pikes.

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Availability: Unique.
• Deployment: Limited.
• Strengths:

+ Trained in the use of Lightsaber pikes, allowing them to combat other lightsaber users.
+ Battle-hardened. These are the elite of the Panathan army, eventually being selected by Venthis to serve for him.
+ Twelve. Their are twelve members, allowing them to swarm and overwhelm opponents.
+ Epicanthix. They are unable to be manipulated mentally.

• Weaknesses:

- Their armour is basic, mainly created from leather and durasteel in places. Allowing them to be easily defeated in combat.
- Slow. From their armour, they are slow.
- Unable to leave either Venthis' owned locations or Venthis' side as they are bound to him, through oath.
- Weak against lightsaber staffs, due to the brief gap in there training which was missed.
- Cannot deflect slugthrowers, or heavy weaponry.

• Description: The Bloodguard were created when Venthis Zambrano came to light within the Zambrano family. Granting him his own personal guard for not only himself but his owned estates. Which they were bound to through oath. The loyalty of these guards are unquestioned, even harming themselves when asked to prove it. They wore intimidating armour, to scare off attackers if they were to dare to enter his property.

Though trained in the use of a lightsaber pike, from Venthis' own suggestion. They have become experts in the use of the weapon. Training when not on duty.

 

[Taeli Raaf]

Under review

 

[Taeli Raaf]

[member="Venthis Zambrano"]

So, reading this over again, I think the submission needs one more weakness. Of your current weaknesses, two of them are tied to their armor and the one about them being unable to leave his holdings or his side isn't really a weakness at all. I would recommend something like a gap in their training that could be exploited or something along those lines.

 

[Yaadri Osi-Yyn]

[member="Taeli Raaf"]

Changes have been made! Added two to be safe.

 

[Taeli Raaf]

[member="Venthis Zambrano"]

Pending secondary approval

[member="Mahet"] [member="Zeradias Mant"] [member="Darth Pyrrhus"]

 

[Kaili Talith]

[member="Taeli Raaf"] // [member="Venthis Zambrano"]

Approved pending final approval.

[member="Mahet"] [member="Zeradias Mant"]

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.