Approved Tech The Bryn'adûl | Ravager Marksmen Rifle

[Tathra Khaeus]

The Bryn'adûl | Ravager Marksmen Rifle

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a unique rifle to be utilised by marksmen.
• Image Source: X
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: The Bryn'adûl
• Affiliation: The Bryn'adûl
• Market Status: Closed-Market
• Model: Marksmen Rifle
• Modularity: N/A
• Production: Minor
• Material: Verikast

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Ravager
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Draemidus Prime Ore
• Ammunition Capacity: Small
• Effective Range: Long-Range
• Rate of Fire: High
• Damage Output: Very High
• Recoil: Average

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Radesh Oil: The shard bullets of DP Ore are coated in radesh oil, allowing them to bypass shields at a lower velocity.
• Compound: When three shards hit a target, the vapour surrounding the individual shards interact and activate the volatile chemicals within that cause hundreds of micro-explosions that compound on one and other into a lethal explosion.

STRENGTHS

• Bypass: Utilises radesh oil to bypass shielding.
• Deadly: The explosive nature of the compounding shards makes this an incredible deadly weapon.
• Output: The weapon has an impressive fire rate.

WEAKNESSES

• Small Capacity: The rifles magazine has a total of eight shots per. Making every shot important.

DESCRIPTION:
This design was realised by the craftsmen of the Akehnaton, utilising their knowledge of compact weaponry to help utilise the nature Draemidus Ore in weapons outside of their standard Shredder sidearms. This alongside the conventional designs of the Draelvasier made for a uniquely deadly marksmen rifle readily available for use all across Bryn'adûl territory.

This particular rifle, nicknamed the Ravager is favoured by the Vaydralen Centurions for its unique elegant qualities and skilful requirements.

 

[MANIAC]

Tathra Khaeus

Hello! I'll be your judge again. Very nice and interestng submission again.

• The submission is a bit underpowered (-1), so if you want to fix it, you can do it.
• Please supplemented the Strengths / Weaknesses with these
  • Effective Range: Battlefield and Extreme will require justification in strengths and weaknesses
  • Damage Output: Very High and Extreme will require justification in strengths and weaknesses
• The other thing what I saw as a problem, the weakness with The rifle can only fire a singular shot every half-second. This weapon with this effective range and damage output is a sniper rifle (especially it's using slug-like ammo). Half-second shot with such weapon is not a weakness, but a strength. So please rework this weakness.

That's all, please let me know when you're edited this.

 

[Tathra Khaeus]

MANIAC

Switched some things around.

The 'deadly' strength was meant to cover the high damage. But, I lowered the range and upped the fire rate and put in a new weakness.

 

[MANIAC]

Tathra Khaeus

Perfect! Thank you for your cooperation! Enjoy your new weapon!

Approved.