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The Deliverence

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HUNGRY HUNGRY HIPPO!
RC 212
Character Bio
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Special Weapon for Karren
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Restricted Missions: The Deliverence
  • Primary Source: Slug Thrower
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Karren Trask
  • Model: .44 Revolver
  • Affiliation: Karren Trask
  • Modularity: No
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Durasteel, Pontite Crystal.
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Enchanted Slug Thrower
  • Size: Handheld
  • Length: 400 mm
  • Weight: 1.1 kg
  • Ammunition Type: .44 Slugs (Variants as long as they are same Caliber)
  • Ammunition Capacity: 6 Shots per reload
  • Effective Range: Personal
  • Rate of Fire: Moderate
SPECIAL FEATURES

  • Force Light Enchantment
  • Exploding Slugs
  • Inertial Compensator
Strengths:
  • Packs a heavy punch at close range.
  • Force Light Enchantment
  • Exploding Slugs
  • No Recoil
Weaknesses:
  • Has a limited range, can only fire at targets within personal range.
  • Intense heat comes from the weapon due to the force being channelled so aggressively through it.
  • Not Lightsaber Proof

DESCRIPTION


  • Force Light Enchantment: The barrel of the weapon is milled with Force Runes along the rifling on the inside. When this weapon fires it's ammunition, the rune act as a spell, igniting and wrapping the rounds in force light. They detonate with ferocity, causing extra damage to darksiders and casting a furious ball of Force Light in the area.

  • Exploding Slugs: The Slugs due to their enchantment, as well as explosive tips detonate, causing double damage compared to what a normal .44 Round could do.

  • Inertial Compensator: A small inertial compensator in the bottom of the weapon helps reduce recoil to almost nothing.

After many lessons in crafting and a few battle Karren saw the need for a more versatile weapon. something that could deal damage in spades to the Darkside. Seeking to end its spread, she came up with the idea of enchanting her own weapon to cast force light every time it fired.

Over a bit of tinkering and a few failed attempts, she succeeded. The Deliverance is the first of many of her works. A .44 Caliber Revolver, that has detonating slugs. As the slugs are fired they are enchanted with force light in the barrel, causing a two fold explosion when hey impact. Explosives, plus an explosive burst of force light comes from the detonation, potentially burning the target twice depending on their alignment.

This weapon is made to be her ultimate tool against the darkness. Specifically to burn and shred Darksiders with heavy armor and arrogant attitudes.
 
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H3xle

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H3xle
Character Bio
[member="Karren Trask"]

Force Light is way too Over Powered to be enchanted into any weapon on any basis.

I won't deny this out of hand, but the Force Light is going to be out of the question.

Let me know if/when you've made changes to it and would like me to resume judging it.
 

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HUNGRY HUNGRY HIPPO!
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Character Bio
[member="Taryc Ap'Irae"]

I am going to have to respectfully ask for a second opinion.

Based on the following.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/36667-force-halberd/

  • Extracted from source: A weapon imbued with Force Light.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/65887-dawnbringer-alkahest-blade/

Extracted from source: Special Features:
  • Alchemised to be almost indestructible. Destroying this weapon would take cataclysmic power or many powerful Dark Side Masters.
  • Can reflect blaster bolts like a lightsabre.
  • Has an overpowering Light Side aura, sufficient to burn Dark adepts or Sithspawn on contact.
  • Can be infused with Force Light, making the weapon glow, allowing the stored energy to be released on contact with an enemy.
  • Increased cutting ability compared to a regular blade, but not as much as a regular lightsabre.
  • May only be truly used by Phylis, Corvus or Taeli. Other Light adepts may handle it, but will not be able to get the most from it.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/114870-helios-jayces-sword/

Extracted from source:

Strengths:
  • Force Light*: Created by Jayce's grandfather, it was intended as a weapon to fight directly against dark siders. Striking a Dark sider cause much more pain than a normal strike as it it also severing the connection of the dark side of the force from the user. (Cannot completely take away the dark side from the victim in one strike. How much taken away is up to the victim). Stories that the sword could emit blasts of light energy, or even contain dark side spirits/manifestations. However, Jayce has no clue how to unlock this as he himself does not have the power of force light under his skill set. (*To use these latter abilities, must complete various other threads to learn of such powers. Will require dev to mention they can be used by him.)
  • Force Light 2: As force like is inherently invested into the weapon, no darksider can wield the weapon as it would burn the dark side out of them. Thus only a lightsider can use the weapon.
  • Force Imbued: Helios has all of the canon effects of said weapons. Resistance to lightsabers, blasters, improved durability/sharper blade, Destruction of force ghosts
Weaknesses:
  • Force Light: Should the user of the sword become dark, or grow darker, the sword will start to burn the user. Kind of difficult to use it and use any sort of dark sided force power, or using very dark emotions.
  • Force Light 2: Force Light is a rare ability for some Jedi to learn. Requiring the user to be of the light side themselves, and requires a lot of energy, and focus upon the force power to use it. The same here is true. Using the abilities, when the wielder is able, will use constant focus, and take a lot of energy to perform. The sword is used as a conduit of force light. Thus the more difficult aspects of this force power, require the same energy as it would be to normally cast it to begin with.
  • Force Imbued: As the weapon is force imbued, should the user enter a nullification bubble, the sword becomes just a plain sword. losing their effects.

A similar effect of all these weapons is that they are able to block lightsabers or are indestructible.

Mine has been foregone for a more static effect as in the interaction with the runes and crystal would transfer force light to the bullet. Also I have added a drawback of intense heat, slow firing rate, and limited munitions, which means Karren won't just be slinging of sixty million rounds like nothing.

I can elaborate on the weaknesses, but with the utmost respect to Judge and staff do not see how this weapon is overpowered or not allowed when there are numerous others already in existence around the site.
 

Cira

Best Onion
Cira
Character Bio
[member="Karren Trask"]

Honestly, I can understand the Factory judges hesitation. But I'll grant you the second chance. [

quote name='Karren Trask' timestamp='1507482465' post='1649722'] Force Light Enchantment: The barrel of the weapon is milled with Force Runes along the rifling on the inside. When this weapon fires it's ammunition, the rune act as a spell, igniting and wrapping the rounds in force light. They detonate with ferocity, causing extra damage to darksiders and casting a furious ball of Force Light in the area. [/quote]

The fact that force light is being used as a ranged method of casting as a ball of force light is the concern. I am not comfortable with this with a very powerful Force power.

you can tone this down to perhaps help you focus in concentration if you need to utilize Force light upon someone else, but it cannot be in a ranged manner.

Thank you for informing me about the other sword, as I will be discussing it's the extent of use with the submitter to clarify things.
 
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