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Approved Species The Draconion

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

GENERAL INFORMATION

    • Name: Draconian
    • Designation: Sentient
    • Home Planet: Draconia
    • Average Lifespan: Can live on average of 150-200 Years, Some exceptions have lived to 250-300 Years
    • Estimated Population: Scattered (Smaller groups or individuals found in many places around the galaxy)
    • Description: Human-like creatures covered in scales, With a tail, Sometimes having wings
PHYSICAL INFORMATION

  • Breathes: Type 1 and Type 2 Atmosphere
  • Average Height of Adults: 8 Feet
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A
  • Skin color: Red, Black, Blue, Bronze
  • Hair color: Same as Skin
  • Distinctions: Males would have shorter Tails, And Females have a slightly larger chest
  • Races: Nothing Other then the Skin and scale colors
  • Force Sensitivity: Rare
Strengths:
  • Breath Attack -Many Members can use there breath to attack hostile Entities. It is normally fire.
  • Natural Strength -Early in their age, they normally get stronger then most other species in the galaxy
Weaknesses:
  • Low Birth-rate - Due to the size and age limits of this race, birth rates are very low in comparison to most other species
  • Aggressive -Easy to provoke into violence
  • Breath Attack Recoil- Due to the Breath not being fully Evolved, It does hurt them a bit to use it, Leading to it being used as a last resort in combat
CULTURE

  • Diet: Omnivore (Will mostly eat meat however)
  • Communication: Spoken, Body Communication
  • Technology level: Galactic Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs: Similar To the Mandalorians, They believe in an Honor system, and Believe the greatest of their Kind are reicarnated as great dragons after death. There Honor System Dictates that during times of war, that any warrior has the right to pick there death, be it ally or enemies. In times of peace, No warrior will try to inflect a war, and combat is a last resort.
  • General behavior: Will Engage in aggressive Diplomacy, However will never cross certain Lines as Dictated by there code of "Draconian Honor" Peace will always be proitised rather then war

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Found 1000's of years ago upon the large planet of Draconia, where the humble but slightly aggressive draconion. While at the time of being found they were on the cusp of gaining true sentience and were in turn Uplifted by there founders. These creatures would in turn use the tools and metals at there disposiale to quickly advance, age after age, Quickly coming to a similar tech age to match the rest of the galaxy

Believed to descended from Long dead Dragons on their Homeworld. They developed Very quickly as many immigrated species Encountered them, and would soon make there world Neutral on the Galactic Scale, But will accept most refugees. Upon meeting The jedi, They would slightly fear there powers as they never encountered anything like them before as it seemed like magic. Over years and years, many helped in the construction of the orbital dockyards that would soon be one of the main money makers for the planet. The Refit league was soon born after that. Currently they are signed into an alliance with The nearby system of Zakuul

One Of their greatest achievements was something called "Arco-home" In which miles of the ground below were minded out not only to get the resources underneath, but also to expand there citys far beyond what they normally could do. The deepness rivals that of Coruscant. Miles above the ground and even into the atmosphere was the limit for the tallest of buildings, moving far beyond what most of the galaxy had ever seen before. Due to the Urban area only being about 45-55 percent of the planet's surface, the population cap can reach to similar amounts to over full econopolis planets
 
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Breaker of Chains
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Alrighty now for the species with the planet and whatnot done eh? There are a few minor fixes here but nothing too major!

Given that the Image Credit link doesn't lead to anything that will need to be fixed, I went ahead and did a quick image search to grab a link for you to replace the one you have there though. A link to their home planet in Origins is also needed.

One of the areas that I'd like to see some more information in is Religion/Beliefs. You mention that they have an honor code and system similar to the Mandalorians but what exactly does that system entail? Honor is a rather vague concept and every culture both real and fictional have their own versions of it. Honor can be something as simple as respecting your opponents or something as overarching as being a good person in general, just some more detail on the Draconian version of it would be good to see! Also Historical Information could do with a bit more detail, how did their honor system form, how did they organize their early and contemporary society, things like that. Just a bit more information!
 
Breaker of Chains
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Excellent, thank you for the additions. I am willing to approve this for you but I do have to say that the Historical Information is still a bit lacking. This is really where detail is best used, how did the species form the society that it has and why, those sorts of things. I am willing to approve this if you don't want to add anything else but I would recommend some more detail. Just let me know when you're ready for approval either way!
 
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