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Approved NPC The Dragon guard

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: The Dragon guard
  • Affiliation: Stardust Solus Skirae
  • Classification: Bodyguards for Stardust Solus Skirae Stardust Solus Skirae
  • Description: Dawning a emerald cape to signify their allegiance to Stardust Solus Skirae Stardust Solus Skirae and wearing a knight like armor set with sharp talons at the tip of there fingers they do not speak in words but in their actions mostly staying with Stardust and attacking when she orders them too.
COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Unit Size: Small
  • Unit Availability: Unique
  • Unit Experience: Elite.
  • Equipment: There armor is of a Phrik/Cortosis mixtured armed with a molecular edge vibro greatsword.
  • Combat Function: They serve as bodyguards and sometimes the talons of Stardust Solus Skirae Stardust Solus Skirae and follow her commands and no one else's.
Strengths:
  • Expert Pyrokinesis: They have trained and taught how to master the art of fire to the point that they can sometimes create weapons out of the flames that they can throw and use for brief periods of time
  • Biological Resilience: With some experimentation and testing there bodies have been honed to be resistant to most poisons making them about 70% less effective then they would be to anyone else and diseases are a thing of the past to them.
  • Physically Fit: There bodies were honed and trained to make them quick and agile yet have the strength of a wookie
Weaknesses:
  • Not so effective in the cold: There abilities effectiveness is reduced by 20% in cold environments versus warmer climates.
  • Increased Metabolism: Due to the demands on there body to keep there biological resistance they require to eat twice as much then normal as they burn off more energy.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Dragons guard a small unit of 4 highly trained individuals who went through modifications and trained in the ways of using a greatsword or large two handed weapons as easy as a one handed weapon, they were built and taught pyrokinesis until it was second nature to them to guard and work in tandem with Stardust Solus Skirae Stardust Solus Skirae and as such they are only loyal to her and will follow her commands. These commands can vary from protecting her or her family to removing a threat from Stardusts path. They are not as effective in the cold as they are in the warmer climates but they were built to be a force to be reckoned with, They do not speak only allowing there actions and there works speak for them, they only kill with efficiency and brutality worthy of the name the dragons guard.
 
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Zak Dymo

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I'll be doing this review for you. There's just one thing I see that needs adjustment.

1. Affiliation

  • Affiliation: @Stardust Solus Skirae

As per the template, this should reference the character bio, rather than tag the user. This is so that the link continues to refer to the correct character even if the account is changed, deleted, or renamed. You may want to check to confirm the link for the bio, as I note the one linked in that writer's profile is a broken link. I believe this may be the correct one.

2. Remove Template Instruction Language
COMBAT INFORMATION: The combination of Unit Size and Availability below is the indicator of how numerous your unit is. Stormtroopers for instance would be considered Large/Common, while Rogue Squadron would be a Small/Unique unit. Majority Force User Units are prohibited from being Common or Large. The stronger and more specialized your unit is (FU or NFU), the smaller and less common it should be.

The highlighted text is meant to provide guidance on filling out the template, and is not meant to be part of the submission. Please remove this text from your submission.

Once that's done, I'll move this along.
 
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