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The Eye of Koda

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide Viz Harridan with a cursed item, and subsequently break curse and reuse material.
  • Image Source: Etsy
  • Canon Link: Wookiepedia
  • Permissions: Personal Use, Use by the Family and Moonveil Inc.
  • Primary Source: Wookiepedia
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: The Tempestro
  • Affiliation: Viz Harridan, Moonveil Inc, The Family
  • Market Status: Closed-Market
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: Stone can be removed and used in place of any crystal. Setting can be melted or scrapped.
  • Production: Unique (Only One Character)
  • Material: An unkown crystal type that resembles Nishalorite Crystal
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Muddled Grey color
  • Size of a small fruit, fits in palm of hand.
  • made of an unknown crystal that resemble Nishalorite Crystal
  • If used in a lightsaber, Crystal creates dense blade and can serve as a wayfinder.
  • extremely and historically cursed.
STRENGTHS
  • Can replace a crystal in a lightsaber, it benefits the user by creating a dense blade which amplifies if north facing.
  • Can be used as a way finder
WEAKNESSES
  • Extremely cursed.
  • Brings any who own it misfortune, and in extreme cases, death.
DESCRIPTION

From Wookiepedia:
"The Eye of Koda was an amulet or a medallion encrusted with a gem. It was named after the legendary scout Krin Koda, who had found it. Although there were many legends about its purpose, the gem was in fact a map representing stars and planets. It led to a planet which was home to the Tempestro temple, on Koda's World.

The Eye was originally bestowed upon Krin Koda by the Tempestro after he saved them from a great disease. After Koda's disappearance shortly after he had found it, the amulet passed from many hands for a number of the years, afflicting its owners with misfortune and death."

Further extrapolation:

Over a vast number of years, the Eye of Koda has exchanged hands, and has been something of a cult obsession. Being that the crystal itself is monetarily worth quite a bit, the legends surrounding this medallion have been exchanged under the table. While the original owner, Krin Koda, believed the piece was a map, that purpose has been long outdated by numerous charters. The Eye is more particularly studied for the effect it has on its owners. The Eye was mined and then given to Krin Koda by the Tempestro, who were subsequently colonized by Koda after he saved them from a blight. The Eye has a long history of causing inexplicable bad luck and misfortune to the user, often ending in death.

Legend provides that the Eye of Koda's curse can be broken by a force-sensitive individual who is willing to make a "Sacrifice of the Soul".

While looting the starship The Avenue 5, Viz Harridan stole the Eye of Koda , prompting a curse which effects her at present.
 
T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
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Viz Harridan Viz Harridan

Hello! I'll be your judge today! I like this artefact, however I found some major and serious problems:
  • Please use the original art link.
  • Affiliation, this is a unique item, what means only 1 character can keep it. You wrote 3 different thing. Please keep only your character, link it, and please delete the rest.
  • Please add the Force Alchemy to the Materials
  • "Extremely and historically cursed." - what the cursed means? Please explain it.
  • "Can be used as a way finder" - please explain this one too.
  • "Extremely cursed." - please explain this one too.
  • "Brings any who own it misfortune, and in extreme cases, death." - what the misfortune means in this case? How this affect to the user?
  • This is a cursed item, so connects to the Force, please add to the weaknesses, what happen the object if it is under Force Suppression/Force Nullification effect.
  • About when you copied the entire article from the Wookie, you break the General Factory rules, so please edit this part, following the rules:
    General Factory Rule #4: "Small excerpts may be included from other sources in a sub, but they must include a credit, link, and be clearly marked."
  • And a simple note, because I see you're a new member on the site and Factory. Maybe that would be the best, if you treat this like a copy artefact, because anyone else can say they have their own Eye of Koda. You can say it’s the original, but anyone else can say the same, if their wants one Eye of Koda. However if you make an own one, which is modified, and you wrote it, in that case that is really unique. But in the case of the the canon items, anyone can say they are held the true and original one, no matter you make a sub or not.
  • And you can use the Eye of Koda without a submission, because it is a Wookieepedia item. So do you want to edit this submission, or I should archive it?
 
Hi!
I will fix these things.

I consulted veteran players, and was told I should sub this if I was to extrapolate on it's details in any way. In my case, I am planning on using it in my lightsaber and wanted to make certain that was going to be okay in practice. That is the only reason I was subbing it. If I can still use this as a crystal for my lightsaber without a sub, then I won't sub it.
 
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Factory Judge
Viz Harridan Viz Harridan

No you don't have to. It is enough if you link the Eye of Koda in the lightsaber sub. Or even, you don't need to sub your lightsaber either, it is enough if you write in your equipment, lightsaber with a gem/crystal from the Eye of Koda. The Factory and Codex is not mandatory, just optional.
 
Oh okay, I think I was worried if I got too creative I needed to sub it to make it official. I appreciate you looking at it. I'm just going to use it without a sub if this is the case. Would you mind archiving it? Again thanks for your time.

Good news: I now know what you are looking for when I do sub new tech.
 
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