Approved Starship The Femme Fatal

[Nisha Decrilla]

Image Source: samurairyu on deviantart
Development Thread: None
Manufacturer: Silk Holdings
Model: dragon-class frigate
Affiliation: Apoleia Inc.
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: various inc but not limited to Alusteel hull, durasteel frame
Description: With business booming, and new profit prospects on the horizon, Anaya commissioned Silk Holdings to design a new ship for her. Built to be a base for her business operations to allow her to remain flexible in her travels as it expands, the Femme Fatal is not designed for combat. Considering her array of enemies and the expanding war, however it was essential that the ship have basic defenses and a small array of fighters to protect transports moving to and from the ship, its deflector shields cannot protect against projectiles such as missiles and as such the signal scrambler was fitted, though it provides an ulterior use to making sure she remains unknown if necessary. With no fixed abode, the ship also serves as a home for Anaya, equipped with an expansive living area for the Sith situated above the bridge to allow her to drop in and ensure the ship is running smoothly. Other rooms include a recreational area for the crew, (captained by Alastair Crowley [NPC], Anaya’s oldest serving subject) a conference room and 5 luxury cabins for any guests that Anaya might have.
Intent: To provide a base of operations and home for Anaya Fen
Role: Transport
Height: 150m
Length: 300m
Width: 150m (exc wingspan) 300m inc wingspan
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Antimatter reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: 2.0
Minimum Crew: 60
Optimal Crew: 100
Armaments: 20 turbo lasers, 6 point defense lasers.
Hangar: 1 Aleph class fighter , 4 Callan Class Starfighters 4 A-36 Sleuth
Non-Combative Attachments:
Hyperwave interceptor, Deflector shields, sensor scrambler
Passenger Capacity: 10
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 6
Consumables: 1 year

 

[Domino]

You need the width dimension and a source for your image.
Your listed height looks more suitable as the width.
@me when you've added those two and taken another look at your dimensions.
@[member="Anaya Fen"]

 

[Nisha Decrilla]

This is what happens when I do a tech submission when i'm half asleep and talking on skype to a bunch of crazies.
Dimensions as adjusted to what they were supposed to be and source added

@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

Bump up your crew, something this size should be in the hundreds even if it's not a combat oriented ship.
The Washburns have to go, they're simply too big to fit. You can replace with another type of ship though.
Description needs quite a bit more meat. Needs to share your vision of what the sip is and can/can't do as well as setting down solid info for RP with it. For instance, you could write about how you acquired it, the scrambler, interior design, ect...
Fuel cells also aren't really appropriate for a ship this size, low output and shorter life than a reactor.
You need to add the consumables section of the template.
@[member="Anaya Fen"]

 

[Nisha Decrilla]

Edits made as requested. I haven't included consumables as i didn't believe it was a required field. - see ship guide
@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

It's in here, which is really easy to just copy/paste so you don't miss fields. The guide is just an explanation, since consumables doesn't need a second explanation, it doesn't get one.
@[member="Anaya Fen"]

 

[Nisha Decrilla]

I know, I wrote the guide. Never would have guessed, eh?

consumables added

@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

Clean up the font size and the random 't.' and it's approved.
@[member="Anaya Fen"]

 

[Nisha Decrilla]

done
@[member="Domino"]

 

[Domino]

Approved pending secondary.

 

[Lief]

Approved.