Factory Denied The Five Fold Swords - Thunderbolt

[Viridian]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create one of a series of ancient Force Enhanced Swords made by Jake Ateris and that is wielded by Viridian
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writer’s submissions as part of the submission)
• Primary Source: https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Alter_Environment
• https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Sith_sword
• https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Telekinesis

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Jake Ateris
• Affiliation: Viridian and Jake Ateris
• Model: N/A
• Modularity: (Can components of this submission be swapped out for other components? Is it especially easy to modify? For most submissions, put 'No'.)
• Production: Semi Unique (Jake Ateris Viridian )
• Material: Alkahest, Veshok Wood
  Force Crystal
  Ayalayli Thorn Wood
  Neyaoi-Wood (Also here)

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Sword
• Size: Large
• Weight: Heavy

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Guardian: As a precaution against misuse of the blade by those who use the Dark Side of the Force, the maker of the sword, Jake Ateris studied the methods of the Holocron Guardians. This was modified, and put into the sword so it could protect the blade from abuse.

STRENGTHS

• Clash with Lightsaber: The sword can clash with Lightsabers due to Alkahest that was used in the creation of the sword.
• Force Light: The sword is effective against the Dark Side of the Force, to a degree.
• Blade Call: The sword can be called to the hand of the user by means of telekinesis that has been applied to the sword.

Enhance Armament:


Release Recollection:



WEAKNESSES

• Beacon of the Force: The sword is a beacon of the Light Side of the Force. As such it is detectable and can't be cloaked in any manner whatsoever.
• Dark Side: Strong enough blasts of the Dark Side could destroy the sword.
• Force Nullification: This could render it a normal wooden sword. In addition, the wooden sword would age to dust because of how old the blade is.
• Heavy: The blade is immensely heavy due to the combination of wood that it is made out of. This makes it hard to swing.
• 2H Sword: The sword is not made for 1H users like Jedi / Sith, but for those who have the stamina to use 2H swords. It also prevents the use of other weapons when the sword is in hand.
• Connection to the Wielder: Any damage to the weapon is damage that is inflicted ten fold on the wielder of the sword.
• Manipulating the Guardian: The Guardian is one of the weak points of the sword that can be exploited. It can be used to deny the person use of the sword.
• Recharge Needed:

DESCRIPTION

 

[Viridian]

John Locke Please move to Live Judging.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Viridian

• Canon Link: (Please link the canon link if applicable canon item.)
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These will need to be filled in N/A is fine to put there

The Guardian: As a precaution against the misuse of the blade by a Sith or similar Jake decided to make something similar to a Holocron inside the blade but with a bit more power behind it than what a Holocron could potentially use. This Guardian has the authority to step in and override the use of the sword. They also have the power to punish the user with the abilities of the sword, or Force Powers they're allowed to use. (Force Lightning, Enhanced Physical Abilities, All powers of the sword.)

Please tell me how he made the blade sentient to that degree.

• Eye of the Storm: Due to the Force Crystal applied when the sword was created, Thunderbolt has a deep connection to both the sky, as well as the weather. This allows the sword to manipulate wind to a limited degree as well as the weather. What it can do is listed below:

Wind-Blades: Slashing the air with the sword, the user will send about 15 crescent shaped blades made out of the air itself at an opponent with a large amount of cutting power. Can be done once per RP. This is one of the first techniques of the sword. To activate, one must say. "Release Recollection - Phase 1"

The second recollection of the sword will allow the person to essentially fly through the air and move with the wind always behind them. It is activated by "Release Recollection - Phase 2"

The final "Recollection" of the sword will summon a 5 Foot by 5 Foot Thunder Cloud in the air above the wielder. It will then send an actual lightning bolt down on someone the wielder dislikes. This can be done once per RP.

Which force crystal is being used to gain this effect?

Stamina Restoration: Another capability is that it restores the stamina of the wielder over time, allowing them to keep going in a fight so long as the sword is sheathed.

If the sword is sheathed what is the range of this restoration? Can it affect everyone since the wielder would not be directly holding it and focusing on it.

• Weather / Electric Focus: For those who know how to do such Force Powers, this would focus and magnify said Force Powers.
• Come to Me: The sword is equipped with the ability to fly to the hand of the wielder should they wish for it to do so. This has a limited range of 100 Feet.

So it can magnify alter environmental techniques and telekinetic techniques on top of everything else it has that it is able to do?

Heavy: The blade is extremely heavy due to the mix of wood types that were used in the creation of the sword. As such, most without the Force or Cybernetic augmentations couldn't even lift the sword, much less swing it around to say the least.

You only have one type of wood listed in the materials. What combination of wood is used to make the sword require such physical enhancement?

Release Recollection: Doing this technique really saps the stamina of the person who does it, to the point where they will nearly pass out.

So if it drains stamina and recovers stamina... it evens itself out and costs no real stamina?

Requires Recharge: After releasing the Recollection, the sword must be planted upside down in the ground for an entire night so the power of the sword can recharge. If not recharged, it becomes a normal wooden sword.

Please explain this further?

Punishment: Should the user of the sword fall and become a monster, the "Guardian" programmed into the sword would punish them by using the abilities of the sword against them.

Explain how sentient the guardian is?

Force Crystal: The Force Crystal in the pommel and the hilt are the source of all the abilities possessed by the blade. Any damage to the crystals will age the swords to dust, and nullify all the abilities they have permanently.

Again please explain this crystal

I will be honest this sword is much like your previous ones vastly overpowered with barely weaknesses that are beyond situational. The powers it has are powerful with little beyond vague "I did it" for how it was able to be created and it is stacked with non-weaknesses on top of it since it is a force enhanced blade. That you added sentience to the weapon that is able to judge and attack with the weapon. This is not even bordering on darkstaff territory this is going into it even further. There is going to be a lot of work required before this gets approved.

 

[Viridian]

Please move it back to Pre-Factory then.

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

As you wish

 

[Listib Hibin]

Viridian

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