The Je'daii Code

[Lief]

There is no ignorance, there is knowledge​

There is no fear, there is power​

I am the heart of the Force​

I am the revealing fire of light​

I am the mystery of darkness​

In balance with chaos and harmony,​

Immortal in the Force​

 

[Lief]

The Refined Je'daii Code​

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In emotion, know peace​

In peace, find serenity​

With serenity, seek knowledge​

Through knowledge, attain the strength to cast off your chains​

Through the Force, be set free​

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OR​

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In emotion, know peace​

In peace, find serenity​

With serenity, seek knowledge​

Through knowledge, attain strength​

With strength, cast off your chains​

Through the Force, be set free​

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OR​

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?​

 

[Julius Sedaire]

I really like the second of the redefined ones!

 

[Lief]

[member="Aitis Powarth"]

We shall have the First as the Je'daii Code and the Second as the Refined Je'daii Code. Leaving us with:

There is no ignorance, there is knowledge​

There is no fear, there is power​

I am the heart of the Force​

I am the revealing fire of light​

I am the mystery of darkness​

In balance with chaos and harmony,​

Immortal in the Force​

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AND​

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In emotion, know peace​

In peace, find serenity​

With serenity, seek knowledge​

Through knowledge, attain strength​

With strength, cast off your chains​

Through the Force, be set free​

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I may do further edits on the second, just to make it flow a little nicer.​

 

[Julius Sedaire]

[member="Jyn Sol"] - I still favor the second, but they both look amazing.. I do agree the flow on the second is a bit off, but I can't put my finger on how... I tend to suck at meter and rhyme, hence why I probably won't ever have any songsteel! lol

 

[Lief]

[member="Aitis Powarth"]

Well the first is the Official one, the second will be one we (Jyn and Aitis) will eventually create when we bring about the Je'daii Order I'll figure out what it is, maybe do a little bit of rewording.