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Codex Denied The Loma System

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The Loma System
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a new home for the ZU
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SETTING INFORMATION

    • Star System Name: Loma System
    • Region:Unknown Regions
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    • Affiliation: [ Eternal Empire/Zweihander Union
    • Accessibility:This space was untouched until discovered by the ZU in their search for a new home.
    • Description: There are 16 planets in this system
SYSTEM INFORMATION


SOCIAL INFORMATION

    • Population:Uninhabited.
    • System Traffic Untraveled.
    • Demographics: N/A
    • Native Species:N/A
    • Immigrated Species: ZU
SYSTEM FEATURES

Star Stats
Star name: Loma
Star type: B-Type Main Sequence (Blue-White)
Age: 54 million years old
Mass: 28 Solar masses (Sun = 1 Solar mass)
Radius: 5 x Sun's radius
Loma's Habitable Zone
Inner Edge: 22.07 AU
Outer Edge: 46.39 AU
Width: 24.32 AU
Planet Distance from Loma in AU
Total Planets: 16

Distance:
Cir - (0.42 AU)
Zolocy - (1.98 AU)
Umecle - (2.01 AU)
Stuft - (2.93 AU)
Neat neat - (4.33 AU)
Kenilciga - (4.39 AU)
Lowerle - (4.7 AU)
Vair - (6.95 AU)
Jel'hal - (10.27 AU)
Myunyogyabyu - (11.01 AU)
Laminecis - (13.31 AU)
Yanissan - (17.15 AU)
Gal'ros - (24.56 AU)
Feccun - (28.43 AU)
Midascice - (36.16 AU)
Syum - (67.07 AU)

Other Objects:
Proto Planets: 4 ~ Significant Asteroids: 45 ~ Significant Comets: 5

Cir
Molten Planet
Cir has a very slow orbital speed.

Zolocy
Molten Planet
Zolocy has an axial tilt of 181 degrees.

Umecle
Rocky Planet (No atmosphere)
Umecle regularly flies through an asteroid field.

Stuft
Rocky Planet (No atmosphere)
Stuft has an axial tilt of 52 degrees.

Neat neat
Rocky Planet
Neat neat has a complex ring system.

Kenilciga
Failed Star
Kenilciga has a retrograde orbit.

Lowerle
Desert Planet
Lowerle has a large ring.

Vair
Rocky Furnace
Vair has no seasons.

Jel'hal
Rocky Furnace
Jel'hal has multiple rings.

Myunyogyabyu
Ice Giant
Myunyogyabyu does not rotate.

Laminecis
Large Rocky Planet
Laminecis has a very fast rotational speed.

Yanissan
Large Rocky Planet
Yanissan has a very slow rotational speed.

Gal'ros
Earth-like Plane
Gal'ros has multiple rings

Feccun
Earth-like Planet
Feccun has an axial tilt of 52 degrees.

Midascice
Earth-like Planet
Midascice has a tidally locked moon.


Syum
Ice Planet
Syum has a decaying orbit.


SECURITY

Zweihander Union/EE Forces

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Loma System was found after intense exploration efforts from the ZU. They needed a new home and were living out of stations in the middle of nowhere. That is when they discovered the system now known as Loma.
 
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Alli Vern Alli Vern

What's the status on this sub? Would you like more time to complete it or is this ready for live judging?

If I don't hear anything back within a few days, this submission will be archived for inactivity. If you would like it pulled back out of the archives so that it can be worked on - Please make the request in the Submission-Modification Thread.
 
Alli Vern Alli Vern

Hey there, sorry for the wait! Before we begin you should know I am a judge in training, so this will require secondary approval.

An entire system! I like it, but there are some things that need a little tweaking.
  • Accessibility: This space was untouched until discovered by the ZU in their search for a new home.
While it may have been undiscovered, how easily was it found? Is it difficult to access? Here's the blurb from the template:
  • Accessibility: [Describe logistical information on how easy it is to find/access this location. Is it hidden? Is it isolated from society deep in space or is it in the middle of civilization near busy hyperlanes and star systems? Is it guarded?]

Next is Size. How large is the system on the grander scale of the galactic map? Is it average? Can you pass by and miss it? Does it take months to get through in hyperspace? Here's the list:
  • Size: [ Choose from the following: Insignificant, Small, Medium, Large, Massive. ]

That seems to be it for now!
 
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