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Approved Starship The Lost Blade, Modernized C70

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Ori'Alor Tal'Verda

Leader of the True Mando'Ade
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Intent: To give the Liberty Concord anouther Corvette, and a home for Alliera
Development Thread:
Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corperation(Original and Rebuild/Modernization
Model: Carger C70 Consular Refit
Affiliation: Alliera Verd
Modularity: Minor
Production: Unique
Material: Alusteel, Glasteel
Description: The Lost Blade's original history is lost to time inmemorium, a wreck from one of the many battles of the clone wars, it stayed that way for an unknown amount of time. At a point though, a young warrior from the Liberty Concord, Alliera Verd, came across the Wreck and had it towed back to the CEC so they could rebuild and modernize it for her. She payed less for it then she would have paid for a newly built equivelent Frigate, and was able to have some say in the design choices. Like the incorporation of a Concussion Launcher in the top of the Salon Pod that was otherwise used for a dual perpous Entertainment and Training suite. Incorperated into the design was specialized Accomidations for the Droid Crew of the ship, and more comfortable Captain's accomidations to make it possible for Alliera to live on the ship without being cramped. Modern Alusteel and Glasteel were molded to the old and refurbished frame, giving the frigate modern armor.

Classification: Corvette
Role: Frigate
Height: 34.6
Width: 77.9m

Length: 138.55 M
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Hypermatter Reactor
Hyperdrive Rating: 1.5(Secondary 15)
Minimum Crew: 2
Optimal Crew: 8
Armaments:

  • 5x Twin Turbolaser Cannon Batteries
  • 2x Point Defence Medium Laser
  • 1x Concussion Missile Launcher(Incorperated into top of Salon Pod)
Hangar:
  • Detachable Salon Pod
  • 4x Escape pod
Non-Combative Attachments:
  • Standard Sensor Suite
  • Standard Life Support
  • Standard Navigation
  • Salon Pod Training and Entertainment Suite
  • Droid Bay and Recharge Center(For Droid Crew)
  • Comfortable Captains Quarters
  • Armory
  • Captain's Kitchen and Dinning Room
Passenger Capacity: 30
Cargo Capacity: 6,000 Tons
Consumables: 1 Year.
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 5
 
Okay, this is a very nice write up and you've kept it rather close to the cannon specs for the ship which earns you a big internet cookie from me, but there are a few minor things that pop up that you'll need to take care of right quick.
  • You need the full template which includes all the sizes, I know they're not listed in the Wookie, but I calculated them out and you can find them here.
  • You also need to include the base speed, 5 would be good for the weapons this has.
  • Please remove batteries from your turbolaser listing. They denote a group of four while this ship only has 5 total. It's a mistake in the Wookie.
  • Need time for consumables. Again, I know the wookie doesn't have one but that gives you some freedom.
  • CEC is a company heavily affiliated with OP and I don't know how they'd feel about working on a Concord ship, I'd actually recommend having this just be afiliated with your character and then just use it for faction stuff, or asking @[member="Ayden Cater"] for permission.
@[member="Alliera Verd"]
 
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