The Preatorian | Warhammer-Class Star Destroyer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To Create a Flagship for Joseph Torson
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source:
  • Enforcer | Warhammer-Class Heavy SD

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: SularenCo
• Affiliation:
  • Shadow Association
  • Hand of Purification
• Model: Warhammer-Class Heavy Star Destroyer
• Production: Unique
• Material:
  • Rienforced Impervium Hull and Frame
  • Duralium Inner Plating
  • Molded Duraplast Interior
  • Doonium outer plating
  • Transparisteel Viewports
  • Strategic Stygium Crystal incorporation

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Heavy Star Destroyer
• Length: 2,700 meters
• Width: 1,650 meters
• Height: 1,450 meters
• Armament: Extreme
  • Proton Beam Cannon [x2]
  • Shield Leech Weapon [x1]
  • Quad Long Range Heavy Turbolaser Batteries
  • Quad Heavy Ion Cannons
  • Dual Heavy Turbolaser Batteries
  • Dual Medium Ion Cannons
  • Quad Laser Heavy Cannon
  • Point Defense Laser Cannons
  • Null-Brust Projectors
  • Missile Launchers
    • Proton Torpedoes
    • Brilliant Missiles
    • Mag-Pulse Warheads
    • Assault Concussion Missles
  • Tractor Beam Projectors
• Defenses: Very High
  • Composite Hull
  • Deflector Shielding
  • Particle Shielding
  • Ray Shielding
  • Ion Shielding
  • Molecular Shielding
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite
  • Cap Drain
  • Missile Deactivation Transmitter
• Hangar Space: High
• Hangar Allocations: 18 Squadrons
  • Starfighters: 14 squadrons
  • Support Craft: 4 squadrons
• Maneuverability Rating: Low
• Speed Rating: Low
• Hyperdrive Class: Class 2 | Class 8 Backup

STANDARD FEATURES

• Standard Warship Systems
• Standard Warship Targeting Systems
• Standard Starship Safety Systems
• Tractor Beam Generators
• Escape Pods

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• Automated Navicomputer
• Automated Point Defense System
• Stygium Cloaking Device
• HIMS
• Gravity-Well Projector [x6]
• Enhanced Shield Disrupting Projector [x4]
• Anti-Ion Emission Tracers
• Electronic Counter Measures
• Super Heavy Tractor Beam Projectors
• Hyperspace Tracker

STRENGTHS

• Stealth Ship
• Extreme Armament
• Interdictor Battlecruiser
• Mobile Headquarters

WEAKNESSES

• Exposed Bridge
• Vulnerable Engines
• Vulnerability to EMPs

DESCRIPTION

Spoiler: Edits Made

1st June , 2020

• Materials Changed
• Updated Affiliation
• Added Color to some parts of the submission
• Removed Div Background

 

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Runi Verin

Ready to be judged

 

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Runi Verin

Actually can i have this moved to archive pls

Never mind

 

[Avo]

CETCOM

The Executor-class as inspiration is a classic and fits very well. A solid concept, simplistic and easy strengths/weaknesses, and an overall cut-and-dry submission. I think the only thing I want added is for you to hyperlink the Affiliate for me. Just link it to the Directorate's faction page and that will work for me.

You are also underpowered as far as ratings go. I'll allow for another Extreme rating of your choice, whether it be Defenses or Hangar space. HOWEVER, be sure to make these changes reflect in your strengths and weaknesses as well if you do choose to bump one of these up.

Please @me when you have make adjustments. Thank you!

 

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Avo

Changed the affiliate to Marlon Sularen since the Directorate is dissolved ICwise and increased the Hangar rating to Average.

 

[Avo]

CETCOM

That is going to be a negative, ghost rider. Individual characters may not own personally combat vessels above 500m in length. You'll need to additionally affiliate this with a company or minor faction. Please see the below chart for details:

 

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Avo

Oh yeah forgot about that. I've changed the Affiliation to Organization called Adam Versili's Imperial Remnant after further review of the submission. The Codex Submission for the Organization got archived but i'll have it placed into Pre-Codex and see if i can have it approved soon enough.

 

[Avo]

CETCOM

Negative, I'm not going to take a Codex Lore Faction as an acceptable affiliate either. I'll provide two examples of acceptable affiliations for this 5km flagship:

• Yorkell Industries
• Any Official SWRP: Chaos faction that your character is currently a member of.

Pick one of those and I will stamp this approved.

 

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Avo

Took the Company

 

[Avo]

CETCOM

Approved.

 

[John Locke]

Submission Name: The Malice | Admonitor-II Class Super Heavy Battlecruiser
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: To bring the Vessel Up to Date

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission to live judgement.

 

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John Locke

This is ready for Judgement

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

Under Review.

 

[Fiolette Fortan]

APPROVED.

 

[John Locke]

Submission Name : The Malice | Admonitor-Class Super Heavy Battlecruiser
Link : Here
Reason for Pre-Factory Request : To Update and Remodel Submission

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please remember to include a list of changes made when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission to love judgement.

 

[John Locke]

CETCOM

What is the status of this submission? As per the rules of the pre-factory, which can be found here, submissions may only remain in the pre-factory for one month before being archived. Unfortunately, your submission has been in the pre-factory for longer than a month, if you could please update us on if you still intend to complete it, or if you would rather the submission be moved to the archives till you're ready to work on it.

 

[John Locke]

CETCOM

Archiving for inactivity. If you wish to have the submission pulled from the archives please put up a post in the submission modification thread.