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Approved Location The Pit

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Nexus Name: The Pit
  • Nexus Alignment: Dark:
  • Location: Coruscant
  • Affiliation: Balaya Praelior Zambrano Balaya Praelior Zambrano
  • Size: Small
  • Strength: Strong
  • Accessibility: Hidden away deep in the valley thaat was created and located under the jedi temple on the surface of the planet. With enough digging the chamber could be accessed.
  • Description: At the bottom of the Dark Lords Tomb and hidden away, the Sacred spires base remains near the lowest levels of the Coruscant structures. At the mountains peak and left open with the lip of the pool measuring seven feet across. The walls are covered with vines from growing plants that were imported, stairs leading up from the pit to the Ravenloft throne to watch. Steps lead into the pit and curve around the backside of the walls leading up into the tomb itself. On chains around the pit are the unseelie walkers fueling the darkside taint into the force nexus and the kolto. The rest of the tomb ornate and built to house the Dark Lord when and if his time comes. Hallways patrolled by the Sith undead after Ember's assault on the valley.
NEXUS EFFECTS
Death magic: With the sacrifice of a progenitor the pool is a powerful source of healing energies for the old emperor before the One Sith became ruled by a council and then fell. The properties can restore the body from the brink of death but infuses twisted shadows like those found in the primordial monolith encountered by the Qreph brothers. It can grant darkside powers to non-force users but breaks their minds mentally driving them in a dangerous and murderous psychosis.

POINTS OF INTEREST
The Pool: The central part of the chamber and main point of it, with reinforced and vaulted ceiling struts to protect it. The waterss are clear and radiate with the power of the darkside as the bones of the massive fish are on the bottome used to line it and more just beneath the surface along the walls. Fallen jedi and other enemies putting the sacrifices into the waters to preform the power.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
The Sacred Spire once the heart of the Jedi Temple of Coruscant was partially destroyed when the valley was created and the temple leveled. The ancient peak of Coruscant that housed the nexus the jedi utilized lost under the new creation but not forgotten. While the valley was being built and the tombs reaching into Coruscant it was turned, the black obsidian casing being converted into an open area. A pit with the ancient force nexus that could be drawn upon by the Dark Lord in the heart of his tomb.

Then the invasion of Manaan came and the theft of the kolto in Ahto city, once the jedi sounded the retreat beneath the ocean the One Sith Forces led by Neph secured more then enough from the silk facilities. The Kolto being taken off world and brought to the tomb. Some minor construction using the remains of the progenitor drained of its life by Selka Ventus being used to form the rim of it, Unseelie walkers. The dangerous mini force nexuses that when combined reinforce each other as the yalisimri lizards do.

All of the components were brought together, formed from the parts created by the One Sith and reinforced by those they fought. Learning, collecting information, adapting to survive and empower. The Ravenloft holocron chair, a throne for the Dark Lord and other regents within the One Sith presented to be used by the ones who control the pit. Using theories of the kolto, using history and knowledge to forge something to nearly mimic the rift.

A hole deep in the planet, filled with kolto and empowered by the darkside and to feed life. A popular theory of why the progenitor survived for so long being the kolto and starmap an artifact empowered by the Rakata and the darkside. The pits intended use to allow the Dark Lord himself to refresh with a darkside empowered kolto immersion to restore his body and powers.

With the fall of the one sith and reclaiming of Coruscant by various groups. The chamber was lost.. with the temple being rebuilt there was minimal efforts to uncover chambers hidden on the surface of the world.. the tunnels filled with things that were always dangerous before and now near the darkside they are able to be more dangerous. Balaya has established a small way to access the chamber in secret but it serves only for ones like herself or her old master Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex who would know of the existence.
 
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I was considering asking for a development thread, but this is basically just the combination of multiple assets already made or gathered. As far as I can tell, you're good to go. As always, abuse and suffer.

Approved pending secondary.

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Submission Name: One Sith Battlelord
Link to Submission: One Sith Battlelord
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: The Nightmare Child
Link to Submission: The Nightmare Child
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: The Pit
Link to Submission: The Pit
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: The Golden Ropo
Link to Submission: The Golden Ropo
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs

Submission Name: Al-Khali
Link to Submission: Al-Khali
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Update to current standards and fix subs
Please include a list of changes and don't forget to tag Codex Staff when you're ready, or, you can use the "Ready for Judgement" Pre-Fix.
 
Under Review Balaya Praelior Zambrano Balaya Praelior Zambrano

Overall, your edits look good! Everything fits the new template. Just two things I'd like to point out:

  • The Intent still references the One Sith.

  • The Affiliation still references the One Sith.

Since the One Sith are no longer a galactic power (as you mentioned in Historical Information), did you want to change those fields to reflect that The Pit is now affiliated with Balaya, Carnifex, and their circle of Sith specifically?
 

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