Factory Denied The Ring of the Wayfarer

[Katana]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Give Katana one of his creations.
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link:
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• Primary Source:
  https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Force_cloak
• https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Teleport

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Katana
• Affiliation: Katana
• Model: Unique Force Relic
• Modularity: No
• Production: Unique
• Material: Alchemized Duraplast, Sith Alchemy. Force Crystals.

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Teleportation
• Invisibility
• Force Blast

STRENGTHS

• Allows user to teleport using the Force
• Allows user to become invisible using the Force
• Allows the user to shoot concussive energy blasts of the Force out of it. These are equivalent to a stun blaster. They pack a punch much like a Taser would, if it were used on someone.

WEAKNESSES

• Ylasmari Fields
• Void Stones
• Can be depowered
• Needs time to recharge.
• Requires concentration to use.
• Can only use one Force Power at a time.
• Really draining on him to use.
• Can only teleport the person 200 Feet at most.
• Can only sustain Force Cloak for a single post.
• 10 turn cool down on abilities after use.
• Requires Connection to the Force to use.
• Removal of the Crystals renders it useless.
• Needs his mouth free to use it, as he must say. "Ring of the Wayfarer" in order to use any of it's abilities.

DESCRIPTION

The ring was made by Katana so he would have the means to travel rapidly should he need to utilize such. It was also made so as to allow him to travel without people bothering him when he was onboard a Starship, or similar. This ring was crafted by him because he also needed something he could use to get his allies back into operation. The Force Crystals he put into the item allow it to use the multiple abilities he has put into it.

 

[Krass Wyms]

Under Review

 

[Krass Wyms]

Katana

• Canon Link:
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these will need to be filled out you can just put N/A

• Teleportation
• Invisibility
• Force Blast

You went for the grab bag, each of those abilities alone would be more then enough for the ring. You barely explain how teleportation is able to be a factor. Teleport is not an easy skill to use and requires concentration this could lessen the strain of it but that would require already knowing the skill itself. Same goes for cloaking which would likely be light bending. This can be seen through with skilled enough users. Force blasts requires energy and focus from the user.

Overall this can enhance your skills, make them easier to use but it is not going to be able to give you these capabilities and this should be reflected in the submission. I would also recommend pruning this down to one or two abilities.

 

[Katana]

I give up. Krass Wyms Archive it.

 

[Krass Wyms]

As you wish