The saguine parasite

[that one star wars fan]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: to Make a parasite that can fuse with the host and everyday items Also to fuse with my armor to make a parasitic armor

Permissions: N/A
Image source: https://residentevilpodcast.com/jack-krauser-plaga/
Canon: N/A
Links: N/A
Name: sanguine parasite
Designation: Non-Sentient
Origins: the crimson knight order https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/the-crimson-knights.175359/
Average Lifespan: do to being a parasite as long as the host lives or as long as its a living being
Estimated Population: scattered
Description: these parasitic creature will usually not be seen until they change shape into blood red weapons armor and what ever it has to shift into
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
Breathes: needs the host to breath
Skin color: red occasional bone will be exposed
Hair color: N/A
Distinctions: the sanguine rm will not show but when they do the host will be able to transform their body parts into blood red fleshy weapons or other shapes.
Races: N/A
Force Sensitivity: Non-Sensitive
Strengths:
Fueled by the dark side of the force : As the sanguine rm feeds off the darkside when it's host uses the darkside of the force they will become stronger
Regeneration: do to being a growing parasite it can regrow limbs and areas cut off or destroyed
Sanguine weapon: this parasite can shift body parts to blood red weapons do to being fused with the host using alchemical means and being similar to the mggall mggall in the sense that it can shapeshift into many different forms accept the difference is it can shapeshift the host and lives as longs as the host can live https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mnggal-Mnggal
Weaknesses:
Made of Darkside: this creature is made of the Darkside and can be destroyed by the lightside if enough of it is used on this parasite

Darkside hunger: if the host doesn't use the Darkside the parasite will become weaker
CULTURE: N/A
Permissions: N/A

Image source: https://residentevilpodcast.com/jack-krauser-plaga/

Canon: N/A

Links: N/A

Name: sanguine parasite

Designation: Non-Sentient

Origins: the crimson knight order https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/the-crimson-knights.175359/

Average Lifespan: do to being a parasite as long as the host lives or as long as its a living being

Estimated Population: scattered

Description: these parasitic creature will usually not be seen until they change shape into blood red weapons armor and what ever it has to shift into

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

Breathes: needs the host to breath

Skin color: red occasional bone will be exposed

Hair color: N/A

Distinctions: the sanguine rm will not show but when they do the host will be able to transform their body parts into blood red fleshy weapons or other shapes.

Races: N/A

Force Sensitivity: Non-Sensitive

Strengths:

Fueled by the dark side of the force : As the sanguine rm feeds off the darkside when it's host uses the darkside of the force they will become stronger

Regeneration: do to being a growing parasite it can regrow limbs and areas cut off or destroyed

Sanguine weapon: this parasite can shift body parts to blood red weapons do to being fused with the host using alchemical means and being similar to the mggall mggall in the sense that it can shapeshift into many different forms accept the difference is it can shapeshift the host and lives as longs as the host can live https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mnggal-Mnggal

Weaknesses:

Made of Darkside: this creature is made of the Darkside and can be destroyed by the lightside if enough of it is used on this parasite

 

[John Locke]

T that one star wars fan

Under Review

 

[John Locke]

T that one star wars fan

Before we get started, do you have any kind of canon basis for this parasite? Reading through this it looks more like something drawn from The Prototype videogame franchise or Resident Evil rather than anything that seems to be in the spirit of Star Wars.

Biological based armours do exist, most commonly seen in the case of the Yuuzahn Vong, but it's ability to shift into weapons or armour etc is very much a game mechanic rather than the very specific weapons and armour we see in Star Wars. For example, the Amphistaff has the ability to coil up for transport before uncoiling. However, they are not able to alter their form into other objects.

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Aside from the primary issue above, there are several other issues we need to go through.

Name

Name: sanguine rm

This is not the name of the submission. What does the RM stand for? Please make sure the submission name and the name of the species are the same.

Origins

Origins: the crimson knight order

Do you have a link to the Crimson Knight Order

Lifespan

Average Lifespan: do to being a parasite as long as the host lives or as long as the item they infect exist

So if the parasite were to bond to a phrik statue then they could potentially live forever? This would be in breach of the sites rules about immortality, however, this brings up a much larger issue.

How is a biological parasite infecting a non-organic object? I've put the definition of a parasite below as per dictionary.com:

an organism that lives on or in an organism of another species, known as the host, from the body of which it obtains nutriment.

It lives "on or in an organism of another species". A parasite needs to take in sustenance from another living creature so it would be that fact be unable to infect an item or a non-organic object. Please alter the text throughout the submission refers to items in this manner.

Description

Description: these parasitic creature will usually not be seen until they change shape into blood red weapons armor and what ever it has to shift into

The template calls for a short paragraph, not a single sentence. Although the parasites will rarely be seen, you could flesh this out by describing what they look like when not in a body. Are they a worm? Or do they look more like a fleshhugger from the Aliens franchise? This is your chance to give people an idea of what they're dealing with if they want to RP with these parasites.

Height and Length

• Average Height of Adults: [ In metric. ]
• Average Length of Adults: [ In metric. If not applicable put N/A. ]

You must include and complete all the fields in the template. I noticed that these two are missing. Please edit the submission to include them and fill them out.

Distinctions

Distinctions: the sanguine rm will not show but when they do the host will be able to transform their body parts into blood red fleshy weapons or other shapes.

They will not show, but when they do. THat phrase doesn't really make sense. This again is an opportunity to flesh out the submission, how are they different from other parasites that exist? Are there differences within the parasites that can differentiate them?

Body Modification

Regeneration: do to being a growing parasite it can regrow limbs and areas cut off or destroyed

Sanguine weapon: this parasite can shift body parts to blood red weapons

A parasite is an organism that lives inside another without providing any benefit, I think you might be mixing it up with a symbiote. Even if you were, however, a parasite or a symbiote is a discrete organism in it's own right, so how is it affecting its hosts body, allowing the host to regrow limbs or modify them into weapons?

Do you have any canon basis for this?

The Darkside

Made of darkside: this creature is made of the darkside and can be destroyed by the darkside if enough of it is used on this parasite

Do you mean it can be destroyed by the lightside?

Fueled by the dark side of the force : As the sanguine rm feeds off the darkside when it's host uses the darkside of the force they will become stronger

Diet: these parasites feed off the power from the dark side of the force then make it more powerful when their host uses it

I'm not sure if you mean that the organism only feeds on the darkside, or if they become stronger in the presence of the darkside? As a biological organism, they will need nutrients, oxygen etc which I assume they're taking from their host?

 

[that one star wars fan]

John Locke ill get right on the thing about oxygen and nutrients

 

[that one star wars fan]

John Locke should be done now if it isn't tell me and ill get right back on it

 

[John Locke]

T that one star wars fan

You have fixed some of the raised points, but not all of them. Please review my list and address all the points brought up

 

[John Locke]

T that one star wars fan

What is the status of this submission?

 

[that one star wars fan]

John Locke I have been taking a long break from going on here so it might be awhile till I edit this and my other post further

 

[John Locke]

T that one star wars fan

Ok. I'm going to move this to the pre-codex so you can make the adjustments in your own time then.