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Approved Starship The Salvation Gavel

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Source: Dis guy
Affiliation: Ke'Cholo's Corps
Manufacturer: Justice Yards
Modularity: Minor--hangar may be adjusted to the users preferences; the user can also subsitute the image if he would like cause.... it really doesn't matter what it looks like........
Production: Unique
Material: Quadranium steel. Ship parts
Classification: Bomber Cruiser

Length: 900 meters
Width: 150 meters
Height: 100 meters

Armament: 16
--1 heavy forward Hyper Velocity gun
--4 forward mounted proton rocket launchers
-40 side mounted turbolaser turrets, 20 for each side of the vessel.
--8 foreward mounted concussion missile launchers

Defenses: 15
--re-enforced quadarium steel hull
--ray shields
--deflector shields (compartmentalized, see description)
--Particle Shields

Hangar:
--1 fighter of KoCholo's personal use
--personal shuttle
--1 Hammerhead bomber squadron

Special Features:
--Hyper Velocity Gun
--Encrypted bandwidth comms
--leather seats
--Heavy hull
--Deflector sheild compartmentalization (See description)
--Commemorative statue located in in the loading ramp area. This statue depicts [member="KeCholo"] standing over the dead body of a recently slain Hutt to commemorate how he got this vessel.

Maneuverability Rating:16
Speed Rating: 15
Hyperdrive Class: 2.5

Strengths:
++ Who has the guns? We do! This ship sure can pack a punch.
++If it fits.... and has a magnetic material within it, weighs between 500,000 lbs and 2 tons it will fire from the mass driver at 2.546 m/s in a strait line indefinitely, since there is no air friction in space to slow it down.

Weaknesses:
--Fighers? Interceptors? This ship lacks defense against such vessels.
--We just brought sack-lunches: this ship has half the consumables of a ship of its size, making for frequent refuels.
--Pack light too: This ship carries a smaller cargo load because of its massive amount of ammunition needed for the Hyper-Velocity gun, rockets, missiles, and torpedoes.

Description:
Crew: 300
Passengers: 100
Consumables: 6 months
Cargo: 500 tons
--compartmentalized shields: the forward, rear, and flanking shields each have their own generator. This prevents the entire vessels' shields from being overwhelmed all at once from bombardment. The downside is this requires extra fuel and crew.
--My goodness, aren't the red leather seats fancy and comfortable?

James promised a valuable reward to the one who took down the Hutt that threatened both Lady Kay and Gray. When KeCholo stepped up to the plate and delivered, James wanted to make an example of this, that those who treat his people good do get adequately rewarded. In doing so he designed a 900 meter long bomber cruiser to show how much he would pay to for the assistance and care of his people. When it was all said and done, he dusted his hands off and admired his handywork.

This ship, with its massive size, punching power, and armor, is large enough to be a city. It was designed with the intent to bypass shields and shatter hulls of ships 100+ meters. The Mass-Driver is slow to warm up, but it fires anything that has magnetism in it; be it an asteroid or a crate full of metal desks.

For all its amazingness with weapons, armor, and gorgeous leather seats, it has a fatal flaw in that it lacks fighter defense an escort of more viable vessels would be needed to complement it in this regard, else they would risk getting taken down by a farm boy in an X-wing.

Development Thread: if needed
Intent: A custom vessel for KoChee, as payment to a bounty.
Who can use this: KoChee, those he says can use it.
Primary Source: Headhammer bomber
 
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James Justice said:
Affiliation: personal

This should be probably be KeCholo, based on the description, however, you may want to consider its current size. From the Starship Information Template:

1. An individual character may not own a ship greater than 400 meters in length. Ships over 400 meters must be owned by a Faction (Major or Minor) or Company, and may be captained by the character, but in case of leaving will not go with them without exceptional circumstances and faction administrator approval.
In other words, if this is going to be solely owned by KeCholo, it's going to have to be less than 400 meters long. It can be 900 meters though if it is affiliated with a minor faction or a company (provided the company is high enough in tier). KeCholo can then captain it, but it wouldn't officially belong to him.

Let me know what option you want to go with, and we'll go from there.
 
[member="James Justice"], I did a little looking and found this, but otherwise I haven't found anything like a faction homepage or forum that suggests that this is an active minor factionn. This is probably something for Kecholo to look into or work on.

Onto the design itself:



James Justice said:
Armament: 16 Defenses: 15 Hangar: 6 --3 Slicer 5 squadrons --1 fighter of KoCholo's personal use --personal shuttle --2 Hammerhead bomber squadrons Maneuverability Rating:16 Speed Rating: 12

Currently this has the armament and defense ratings of a heavy cruiser, the carrying capacity of cruiser-carrier, and the speed rating of an escort cruiser. While unique production does grant some flexibility with design, the current mixture of this could probably do with some more balancing. I'd recommend picking out one of the archetypes or example ships in the Starship Information & Template thread, and focus on one of those concepts. Alternatively, you might consider averaging some of those concepts or their ratings together if you're looking for something that doesn't easily fit into any of those examples.




James Justice said:
--projector field
What kind of projector field is this? (holo-graph, shield, magnetic, etc)




James Justice said:
It was designed with the intent to bypass shields and shatter hulls of ships 100+ meters. The Mass-Driver is slow to warm up, but it fires anything that has magnetism in it; be it an asteroid or a crate full of metal desks.
This weapon will need its own factory tech submission. It's true that mass driver rounds typically aren't affected by ray shielding, but particle shielding (found on almost all starships) protects starships from any physical collision. I might recommend a hypervelocity gun as an alternative.
 
[member="Gir Quee"]

I apologize, I was told that this was a minor faction. I should have done my digging, I suppose. Alright so:

--I lowered the hangar substantially to one squad of bombers, a shuttle, and a personal fighter
--Reduced size to 400 m, adjusting height accordingly as well
--Changed the mass driver to the HV gun, per your suggestion
--Changed "projector field" to "deflector shield" (pesky autocorrect...)
--Reduced speed from 12 to 15, if it needs to go lower I am ok with that.
--reduced crew and passenger size accordingly
--Made a few spelling and grammar adjustments cause dyslexia

If there is anything else please let me know! Thanks for your help :)
 
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