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The Stargoddess Project

Nyxie

【夢狐】
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Image Credit: R-Type Series "Curtain Call"
Intent: To make a new fighter for myself that I don't have to share because I'm greedy and deserve that much after all the subs I've done for others!

"Engines with a Ship in it."
Development Thread:

Manufacturer:
  • Ri'ess Regal Drives
  • Canopies by the Crystal Heart Workshop
Model: Ariamis-Class Stargoddess

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Affiliation: PRIVATE
Modularity: None (is already customized)
Production: Unique (only Five ever made)

  • Type-I ~ RRDI Private Museum
  • Type-I ~ [member="Ashe the Reaper"]
  • Type-II ~ [member="Judah Dashiell"]
  • Type-I ~ [member=Jen]
  • Type-II ~ [member="Kung Seilois"]
Retail Value: 710,000 Credits
Material: Cryastium Canopy, Titanium Alusteel Frame, Other Misc.
Description: Coupling extremely powerful powerplants with extremely light and durable materials, the Stargoddess achieves post-interceptor speeds seen in only a few personal starcraft in galactic history. Built for comfort and personal use, it retains absolute minimal weaponry with the second-stage variant housing a meager two twelve-millimeter rail guns. However, it boasts incredibly intuitive internal systems and a hyperdrive core that would make Han Solo jelly. There isn't much else to the Stargoddess; it is performance, comfort and elegance mastered - the Reventon of the the civilian spacecraft field.

Classification: Custom Elite Starfighter
Role: Custom Elite Starfighter
Height: 13.6 meters
Width: 11.2 meters
Length: 16.8 meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor:

  • x3 Hi-Output Haylaxian RamDrive Engines
  • x2 TIE Generators
Hyperdrive Rating: .5
Minimum Crew: One, Pilot
Optimal Crew: One, Pilot
Armaments:

Type One:
Type Two:
  • [x2] 12mm Micro Rail Guns (RoF - 60r/m)
Hangar:
  • None
Non-Combative Attachments:
  • RRDI HoloSyntheticTM Cockpit Display (Custom Clear Version)
  • PSIS-M Sensor Jamming System
  • Communications Array
  • Encryption Network
  • Cockpit Ejection Pod
  • HoloNet Transceiver
  • Standard Shield Generators
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • C-N:FA01 Navigational Systems
  • Standard Sensor Array
  • Standard Targeting Systems
Passenger Capacity: One (Humanoid)
Cargo Capacity: 60 kg.
Consumables: One Month Rations for Two
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 1.0
 
Alright then. Let's get to work. [member="Særa Ayña Savan"]

  • First off; this thing is -way- too big to be a starfighter. Starfighters run in the range of 10 - 15 meters. The B-Wing tips out at near 17 meters, and it's more of a heavy starfighter/bomber. This has dimensions more like a freighter than a starfighter, and that would jack with the speed and maneuverability. 29 meters is almost 100 feet long. A real-world F16 Fighter is 15 meters long. By comparison, a C-130 Hercules transport is 29 meters long. The dimensions are going to need to be revised.
  • I'm incredibly leery about this weapon. It's listed as having an equivalency of six capital guns. For comparison, the only starfighter on the board that has a full capital gun has only a single other laser cannon for defense. And this thing is gonna have a weapon six times more powerful?
 

Saera Willamina Savan

~+--- Skaidra ---+~ Beskarsmith, Alchemist
Ayden Cater said:
First off; this thing is -way- too big to be a starfighter. Starfighters run in the range of 10 - 15 meters. The B-Wing tips out at near 17 meters, and it's more of a heavy starfighter/bomber. This has dimensions more like a freighter than a starfighter, and that would jack with the speed and maneuverability. 29 meters is almost 100 feet long. A real-world F16 Fighter is 15 meters long. By comparison, a C-130 Hercules transport is 29 meters long. The dimensions are going to need to be revised.
Really? You've approved most of my 20+m. starfighers. xD
I mean, I'll change it, but... lol.
Also: http://www.boeing.com/boeing/defense-space/military/f15/f15spec.page
19.6 meters. ;)


Ayden Cater said:
I'm incredibly leery about this weapon. It's listed as having an equivalency of six capital guns. For comparison, the only starfighter on the board that has a full capital gun has only a single other laser cannon for defense. And this thing is gonna have a weapon six times more powerful?
It was MADE for this one and only starfighter. They made me list it as guns, but it's not a capital ship weapon - they approved it FOR this starfighter. Basically, it's six cannons and this doesn't have any warheads so that should be reasonable, weapon's own description/statistics notwithstanding.
 
[member="Særa Ayña Savan"]

I am aware of that mistake, and it is just that; a mistake. As I said, a fighter in Star Wars is expected to be between 10 and 15 meters long. That's how it is. I don't care about the one or two one-offs that might be bigger than that. That is the target size. If it's bigger than that, there'd better be a reason for it.


As far as the gun, I wasn't there when it was made. I didn't talk with Rasho about it. If I had been consulted, I'd have mentioned that such a weapon was grossly overpowered for a starfighter. Starfighters do not field capital ship-grade weaponry for a reason. Their power plants just are not big enough and cannot produce the necessary energy in order to power such weapons. My recommendation would be to have a Tech judge pull it back out and re-examine it, because Rasho didn't same himself that it was six capital guns. That seems to have been a you thing. And if that's the case, you need to fix that. You have it labeled there as six capital guns and just six laser cannons here. Consistency is a must.
 

Saera Willamina Savan

~+--- Skaidra ---+~ Beskarsmith, Alchemist
Ayden Cater said:
I am aware of that mistake, and it is just that; a mistake. As I said, a fighter in Star Wars is expected to be between 10 and 15 meters long. That's how it is. I don't care about the one or two one-offs that might be bigger than that. That is the target size. If it's bigger than that, there'd better be a reason for it.
Well, it's in the 16-17 range now. I scaled it down by a fifth. The spare change is because the barrel(s) extend out.


Ayden Cater said:
Starfighters do not field capital ship-grade weaponry for a reason.
EDIT: I've moved my questions to the AMA thread instead of here. :)
Just waiting on the mod request to the original Hyperlance sub to go through now.
For the record, it's nowhere described as being the equivalent of six caps, just that it costs six caps on a capital ship.
 

Nyxie

【夢狐】
Please Achive this until further notice, when the thing with my wording with the main weapon is sorted out.​
No reason keeping a hung submission up if it can't get approved, taking space for more important ones.​
 

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