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Approved Tech The Veritas

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]


  • [SIZE=9pt]Intent:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] To sub a set of armour for Ra[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Image Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Mass effect wiki[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Canon Link: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] (N/a[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Primary Source: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt](Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]PRODUCTION INFORMATION[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Manufacturer[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Locke and Key Mechanics[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] ([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Individual Character Name[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] [member=Ra'a'mah] [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Model:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] The Veritas[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Modularity:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] No[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Production: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Unique [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt](Only One Character)[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Material: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Phrik, electronics[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Classification:[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Medium Armour[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Weight: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Resistances [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]([/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]For each category choose from: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]None[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very Low[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Low[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Average[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very High, [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Extreme [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt])[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Blasters (And other plasma type weapons): [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very High[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Kinetic: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]High[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Lightsabers: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Very High[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Other: EMP/ION: [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Low[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]- Other: Sonic: [/SIZE]Average

[SIZE=9pt]SPECIAL FEATURES[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Phrik: The armour is constructed of the extremely durable metal providing it’s wearer superior protection against attacks. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Rebreather: The Helmet of the armour contains a rebreather which combined with the airtightness seals on the armour allow it to operate in the middle of a vacuum or other hostile environments.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Terminator System: The armour comes with an internalized stealth system which disguises the signature of the user inside, disguising the heat signature as that of a droid. The electronics seeded through the suit act as camouflage acting along with the stealth systems built into the suite to make the armour appear to be a droid rather than a suit of armour. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Madonna System: The armour’s gloves come with wireless transmitters built into the palms that allow the suit to interface with any electronics that they touch. Combined with the Apollo control system this allows the entire suit to act as a slicing tool.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Blaster and Lightsaber resistance: The incredible resistance of the Phrik provides it with a very high level of resistance against blasters and lightsabers. Although it provides a high level of resistance against kinetic weapons, the impact of the weapon still translates to the suit’s user.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Microrepulsors embedded into the gloves and boots of the armour give it enhanced mobility and damage to unarmed attacks.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]EMP/Ion Weakness: Like most power armour the Veritas is vulnerable to EMP and Ion based attacks which can shut down the armour’s systems leaving it little more than a heavy suit of metal.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]User is still human: The Veritas is designed at its core to hide its user from sensors, making them appear as if they were a droid. However no system is infallible, and if spotted while the terminator system is down, or if examined by advanced sensors the subterfuge can be easily seen through.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wireless transmitters in the gloves can not function at the same time as the micro-repulsors: Due to the damaging gravity field put created by the microrepulsors the Madonna system is unable to connect with any electronics, anything that they could influence is damaged by the gravity. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wireless transmitters are unable to pierce heavy armour/metal or penetrate shields.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=9pt]Wireless transmitters limited to affecting objects they can touch.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=9pt]DESCRIPTION[/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Every engineer loves a challenge, and when Ra’amah came to Locke and Key mechanics looking for a capable suit of armour that would disguise her as a droid they leapt at the challenge. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]They approached it by creating the Terminator System, a modified version of their [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]Phantom Cloak[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], which instead of nullifying sensors instead broadcasts back the sensor image of a droid. This returned image is enough to fool basic sensors but a more detailed scan. When activated the terminator would also seal itself off, using cooling systems to modulate the heat emited by the armour to better match that of a droid rather than a human. Again, a more detailed inspection of a thermal imaging of the suit would spot the cooling, but it was more than capable of passing a cursory inspection. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Not satisfied with just letting Ra pass as a droid, the engineers also included a small wireless transmitter in each palm of the armour allowing Ra to slice into any droid or system she touches. [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt](OOC Note: The Madonna system does not allow the user to bypass any security or defences/firewalls which might be in place. It only provides a means of access, the actual slicing is dependant on user skill. As always opposing writers will always determine the result of slicing into their systems, or those of [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]droids under[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] their control) [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]This effectively had the same effect as a normal slicing without the need for wires allowing the slicing to take place on the sly. The system didn’t allow for Mecha Deru, or any enhancement to her skills, just provided another form of access for her to work on the machines. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=9pt]Overall the armour provide to be a successful creation, that gave John Locke several ideas about potential future directions to focus his research on.[/SIZE]
 
[member="John Locke"]

Just a couple things:

- For balance, how does this armor fare against Sonic Damage?

- The way the description is worded gives me a little concern here.

allowing Ra to slice into any droid or system she touches.

Make a note beside this that says something to the effect that: IC, this does not mean the wearer instantly bypasses any countermeasures, firewalls, etc. And OOC, the opposing writers will always determine what damage they take.

Tag me when you've made these updates
 
[member="Darth Metus"]

Thank you for reviewing my submission.

In terms of the sonic resistance, I have the suit at an average resistance. I believe that remains balanced but if you would like me to adjust this please let me know.

I have also added the OOC note as requested
 
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