The 'We Hate Lahi' Thread: Include Why~

[Lahi Te'ala]

So having made a few dozen posts, I figured I might as well make a thread for this, for people to say what they do or do not like - this can be about me as a writer and my writing style, or about the character, really.

If you would like to say what you do like, that's nice too, but please do include ways I can improve as well!

 

[Dune Rhur]

I hate how cheerful and pleasant you are. Be more of an nerf herder, please. The world doesn't have enough of these!

 

[Olan Teff]

What I hate about Lahi - I don't know who she is. *Begins reading Bio*

Good writing, I must say.

 

[Garivald]

I hate that I can't find a reason to hate Lahi

I like your character bio by the way

 

[Natasi Fortan]

Your apparently pathological need for approval aside, I have no complaints.

 

[Jack Sparrow]

I can't hate you, as I have absolutely no idea who you are. Wait,

Lahi, like most Diathim, are found to be one of the most beautiful creatures in the galaxy

Ah. There we go. I hate you because you're beautiful.

Well, bugger all.

 

[Lahi Te'ala]

Your apparently pathological need for approval aside, I have no complaints.

I really just wanted to make a thread title that was less dry than 'Lahi Critique Thread', but I do actually want to improve on her and my writing in general, thus making the thread in the first place.

 

[Ben Corscifine]

I hate Lahi because Lahi wouldn't fall off a cliff and break two peoples' limbs.

Damn wings.

Also [member="Dune Rhur"] likes you better than he likes me, and I won't stand for it.


No, but, in all seriousness, I like your character a lot and hope that we can all continue to develop together. I really look forward to it.

 

[Eli-Mae Forrest]

Really Ben
[member="Ben Corscifine"]

 

[Ben Corscifine]

[member="Quinncolson"]

If Ben had wings, we wouldn't be in this situation.

Silly Diathim with her being tall and having wings. Just isn't fair.

 

[Eli-Mae Forrest]

True and don't blame yourself Ben blame me.

[member="Ben Corscifine"]