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I made Darius about two months ago now to be a plot device in another writer's story. Since then, he's grown to be his own person, and my first attempt at really focusing on a force user's growth. (Cyril started off pretty well developed.) I've tried to realistically capture his growth from a boy to a man, and intend to do much more with his story from hereon, but I'd like to know what a few folks think of him.
 
[member="Darius Sedaire"] - Best space-kid, ever.

You've done well at it. And i'm interested to see what else you do. A pretty realistic portrayal of the unsure kid beginning to find faith in himself, and I quite like that rawness. Proud to have helped out in the story, even minimally.
 
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Thats all I have to say :p
 

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