Cedric Grayson
Ashlan Kaiser
I made Darius about two months ago now to be a plot device in another writer's story. Since then, he's grown to be his own person, and my first attempt at really focusing on a force user's growth. (Cyril started off pretty well developed.) I've tried to realistically capture his growth from a boy to a man, and intend to do much more with his story from hereon, but I'd like to know what a few folks think of him.