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Approved Starship Tiaza's Purr

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Sorr Kortu

Socially Awkward Smuggler
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • She's the fastest ship in the galaxy!: The Tiaza's Purr had been modified to be fast and nimble while being fitted with some of the best hyperdrives in the Galaxy.
  • Armed to the Teeth: Tiaza's Purr has a variety of weapons used to defend itself making it surprisingly capable in dogfights.
  • A nice place to live!: The ship is equipped with quality crew rooms that are the size of a quality apartment room, a mini bar, and a medical bay stocked with a Bacta Tank as well as a lounge containing many games and Holovids.
WEAKNESSES
  • Watch your backside!: Tiaza's Purr's engines are vulnerable for any ship that strikes them from behind. Once they're hit, the ship will need to repair a decent amount of the damage if they want to make the jump to lightspeed.
  • Average Defense: Defense came at the expense of speed and firepower. The Tiaza's Purr will not last long in a slugging fest due to its average shields and hull.
DESCRIPTION

At the start of his adventures, Sorr was given the ship by a Smuggler named: Lady X. He named it the Tiaza's Purr after his girlfriend: Vletti'azan'uosus because of her tendency to purr like a Cat when she was with Sorr. Though amazed at the surprising quality of the ship, Sorr made some modifications of his own as well such as upgrading the hyperdrive and installing an Ion Cannon. Sorr sees the Tiaza's Purr as a second home as he travels the Galaxy with his crew looking for work.
 
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Sorr Kortu Sorr Kortu

Cool design!
  • You cannot use the Galaxy Resort Corporation as manufacturer without Xygrit Sizhran's permission.
  • Please write the rating to the Squadron Count, you missed it.
  • I know the Squadron Count is none, so your ratings is overpowered (+1), please edit.
  • And about the arts in the Standard features section. Please link their links in the Image Source.
 
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Xygrit Sizhran Xygrit Sizhran

This sub is not just one ship, but it has a Minor production scale. So this permission is not good. And please do it in private and Sorr have to link the print screen in the proper place.



Sorr Kortu Sorr Kortu

  • The permission is still not good, because you wrote minor production scale instead of a unique, if it is only one ship, and not more.
  • Squadron Count: Small, please edit to the proper one:
    Squadron Count: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission would have in a squadron. The average squadron for any starfighter is 12, at lengths averaging 12.5 meters. The bigger the fighter, the smaller your Squadron Count should be. The smaller the fighter, the bigger your Squadron count can be. [None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | High: 16 | Very High: 20 | Extreme: 24 ] Squadron Sizes may be listed as just the rating.)

The rest is good, thank you!
 
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