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Approved Starship TIE/EN Enforcer

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Specialized Fighter for the Politorate and Adjudicators
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard Communications Suite
  • Standard Life Support Systems
  • Standard Targeting & Sensor Systems
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Agility | With Combined Speed and Maneuverability , the TIE/EN is a very agile Starfighter making it a tough opponent on the battlefield
  • Heavy Armor | In addition to Agility , the TIE/EN has Heavy Armor and Heavy Shielding allowing it to withstand massive attacks.
  • Stealth Fighter | In addition to it's Agility and Heavy Armor , the TIE/EN is equipped with State-of-the-Art Stealth Systems allowing it to launch Surprise attacks against hostile forces at ease and give them better chance at surviving against their enemy.
WEAKNESSES
  • Armament | While it does have a considerable amount of Weapons for a Fighter of it’s Type , the TIE/EN Weaponry is inferior to other Elite Starfighters with the TIE/EN primarily relying on it’s Heavy Armor and Agility to win the Day
  • Stealth Systems | In addition to the advantage brought by the Stygium Stealth Systems carried by the TIE/ENs when a TIE/EN activates it's cloaking device it will be unable to open fire and will require to lower their Cloaking Device if they wish to attack their desired target
DESCRIPTION
When Sularen reactivated the Politorate , he made sure that the Intelligence Agency came equipped with new Units and Vessels to ensure that it could operate efficiently against it’s enemies. Thus Sularen began works on new Starships to further support the Politorate’s efforts to advance his Agenda. As part of this new initiative , the concept for an Elite Starfighter for the Politorate was made and thus the TIE/EN was born.

Modeled after the New Imperial Order’s
TIE/VX and TIE/HF , Sularen envisioned a fighter with Agility and Heavy Armor to withstand other Fighters with the primary purpose of the TIE/EN being to outlast its opponents rather than overwhelm them with superior firepower as Sularen always preferred. This change in design would allow the Politorate to conduct more effective raids against enemy forces to ensure that Suaren’s Operations would proceed without interruption.

 
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  • Affiliations must be linked - if necessary, re-create any Factions or remove them from the Affiliations field altogether.
  • A Semi-Unique Production Rating is defined as "A single small unit, squad, or squadron" in the Starship Templates. While there is certainly no small amount of leeway in general in the Factory, your "five squadrons per writer for several different groups" is above and beyond what I consider reasonable. It will need to be reduced to more reasonable levels - stealth fighters should be the exception, not the rule.
  • I would suggest linking Stygium Cloaking Devices, given that it's the only unlinked item in Advanced Systems, and the TIE/VX and TIE/HF in the Description seeing as they're not nearly as commonplace as, say, the TIE/LN.
  • Your Strengths and Weaknesses really should do more than parrot the Ratings in a vessel with so many advanced systems - at the very least Strengths should hold some reference to its stealth capabilities and Weaknesses the flaws thereof, e.g., "firing weapons breaks the cloak".
As always, if any of these issues are present in your other submissions please resolve them there too.​
 
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